[Report This]Date: December 09 2013 12:30 PM Title: Ch. 5
Actually, the word is spelled "enthralled." Other than that, I have no complaints. Your cliff-hanger was suitably suspenseful. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks Carycomic, I miss a stroke occasionally, and don't catch little things like that. I refuse to use 'spellcheck', as I'm continually trying to improve my spelling. So, I just free write and edit two or three times, before I submit the chapter, but- it's pretty hard to catch them all, unless I feeel giddy and purposely plant a misspelled word like that, just to see if your paying attention...
Pretty K-gnarly huh? :)
[Report This]Date: December 09 2013 12:01 PM Title: Ch. 5
I'm still reading and look forward to your next chapter. Guess I was right when I said that Bob would distrust his wife now that he knows that she was in on the plan. Anyway the longer you can prevent her from getting him and the worse shape he's in when he's finally found, the more guilty she'll feel and treat him well.
Author's Response:
I don't want to give anything away, but your pretty well on track....
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2013 7:14 PM Title: Ch.4
These three sisters just BARELY put the "fun" in "dysfunctional."
Author's Response:
Yeah, just a typical modern american family... only, one of the sisters has access to a chemical that can actually shrink you down to size! Stay tuned for more twists and turns, Bob's in for some 'narely' experiences, and he has no idea where he'll end up next. Thanks for the comments, much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 12:36 PM Title: Ch. 3
Holy Houdini, Batman!
How did he get out of the sock? *Insert head-scratching icon here.* You definitely depicted him as going in.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 12:30 PM Title: Ch. 2
"Bipolar" doesn't even _begin_ to describe Trish's behavior. :-(
[Report This]Date: December 06 2013 4:30 PM Title: Ch. 2
I can't wait to see how the sisters will react when they discover he isn't in the dollhouse. How they react to that will give us some insight to the kind of treatment he might receive when and if he is found. I would anticipate a rocky road in Carly and Bob's marriage, since she had him shrunk without asking him and basically abandoning him. As I much as I like this fetish, I know I would be ticked off if that happened to me in that manner. Good stuff so far! I hope the next chapter comes soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks Riczar! I'll be posting daily, as long as I don't lose internet,... from (Bad Weather). There'll be a huge pile of twist and turns in this story, I really like to keep the reader guessing....
[Report This]Date: December 05 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent foreshadowing. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks Carycomic!