Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 8: New Warden in Town

The way she dealt the news to him is one of the things I love about Judy, but really -- what's with this kind of teasing? Aren't you supposed to be good at Christmas? ;p

Tnx riczar for asking about his gf -- she's my 2nd favorite character in the series, and even if I thought she would have some part in this story, it's good to hear she will be back.

And in case the next chapter takes more than 24 hours, merry Xmas everyone!

Author's Response:

I don't think even Judy could resist some teasing on Christmas.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: New Warden in Town

Great chapter, cannot wait to see what "reasonable" requests Judy or Maggie come up with. Somehow I thing they both will find a way to keep him shrunk for most of the time.

Author's Response:

Probably not a bad guess.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 7: Awaiting Another Sentence

"Awaiting another sentence". Assuming that her law proposals are still just in her head... ok, I was speculating what may be next, but it was turning out to be such a long comment I decided to just wait, since you've already made up your mind.

(But I'll assume anyway that whatever new law she hs in her mind is still just in her mind, so whatever whe has decided its only going to be his first surprise -- you did mention this story would be a bit longer after all :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  For future reference, I am often curious to hear what people think is coming up next in a story (regardless of accuracy), so don't mind that.  You are right that Judy's got a couple more surprises waiting for Scott.  I've only posted half the chapters so far.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: Awaiting Another Sentence

Oh, I wonder if she intends to tell hime that she sees him as a toy or that she has disowned him and that if his little brother can't accept either fact than time will be split between her and Maddie. Great chapter though kkep them coming.

Author's Response:

Well, that would certainly be quite the twist.  It's not quite what I've got planned, though hopefully you'll still enjoy it.  Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

Yes, the image it makes perfectly sense, what I'm not sure about (remember that English is a foreign language for me) is how to interpret "to pull on her stocking": I thought that "to pull on" == "to put on", and therefore it sounded to me like she was doing the opposite action -- totally absurd. So if I understand correctly she is not "pulling on" her stocking, she is "pulling" and the action is "on her stocking" as in "applied to her stocking"? (tn xfor your patience anyway :)

Author's Response: I see your confusion.  I find trying to explain this stuff entertaining.  Basically, when I say "pull on" I'm not talking about pulling it up her leg and foot, I'm talking about pulling on the end of it that she has in her fingertips, meaning it's slowly peeling its way down her foot and off.  I realize it's an awkward action to describe, it's just that for really intricate interactions like putting on or taking off clothes in a specific way, a little awkwardness in phrasing is probably going to happen.  I just had a very particular image in my head and had to do my best to show it.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 6: Shortcut

So, looks like I've been finally able only once every two chapters :)

Fwiw count me in the group that prefers "subtle giantesses" rather than Maggie -- partially style, and partially the fact that whatever she has in mind Scott won't see it coming: the last chapter showed both of them, it was really THAT great.

And I can't stop thinking about that italicized "home" in "Welcome home"...

 

PS

There's something which is not clear to me in chapter 5, "...then proceeding to pull on her stocking until it slipped tautly off the ends of her thick toes". Should it be "pull off" or am I misunderstanding something?

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I've already preferred at least one "subtler" giantess in the stories I read, so I try to do the same in the ones I write.  I realize that last description you mentioned looks kind of awkward.  What I was going for was the image of her tugging on the stocking and then just holding onto it in one place while the tension in it just slid the rest of the way down her foot and off her toes, if that makes sense.

Reviewer: SilentStep Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2013 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

I check for updates on this story daily. I can't wait to see where the brother comes in. I like his attitude and that "cockroach" remark. I hope you use the brother more too. Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  The brother doesn't really have much of a role in the story after that bit in the car, though I plan to bring him back in later stories in this series as a support character.

Reviewer: SilentStep Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

Excellent as usual. Please keep going!

Author's Response:

Just posted!

Reviewer: farnicle3 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 5: On the Road Again

Brilliant writing. Seriously top notch, and I've been following most of your stuff for some time now. I love how you keep readers anticipating, both in your writing and the predictability of your upload speed. Thanks for writing man, you're legitimately amazing. Please don't stop writing.

 

That being said I'm waiting on a very long maggie chapter with some pretty in depth raunchy foot stuff. And I know you don't usually do butt, but when you did that one chapter in ALB with Jenny, it was pretty good, so if you could throw something like that in that'd be cool too.

 

These are only suggestions though, and please only take them as that. At any rate I will enjoy whatever you write, so thanks again.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading and reviewing.  Maggie's got a pretty lengthy segment later on, so be on the lookout.  As I've already got a baseline down for this story, there won't be butt stuff, but I see no reason for it not to appear in future stories with these characters.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 4: Growing Pains

Great stuff. Can't wait to see more of Judy's bare feet. Hope she takes him in her room for some alone time when they get home. Prep her toes for painting or try to rub them lol. Hope to see more with sexy Judy

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Judy gets the first turn with Scott this time around.