[Report This]Date: January 09 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue
Whoo-hoo! Magnificent dream sequence...
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Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: January 09 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 12: Breaking Amends
First off I want to say that I am enjoying this series and this particular storyline immensely. I've been reading the stories since you first started the series and I've liked the way it's developed. I also wanted to add that I think your writing has improved remarkably over the many, many chapters you have written. Very few mistakes in things like punctuation and spelling, etc., and your style has become more fluid.
You make the characters believable as well; each with their own distinct personality and speech patterns. Your descriptions are good and plot-wise everything seems well thought out, such as Scott's moving on to college and the mother's involvement in getting the law passed, etc.
As to the Giant/M/m wariness, I've noticed that as well, both here and on other 'different fetish' sites. I think you handled it wisely; simply noting M/m interaction beforehand to warn those who do not want to read it to skip the chapter. Personally though I agree with you in your thoughts on supporting characters, and especially male supporting cast. Showing both sexes gives the story and the world that it is written in a firmer sense of reality in my opinion, making it even more believable, despite the fantastic circumstances of the story's theme- shrinking.
Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for reading/reviewing! I appreciate what you said about my writing style; I'd like to think I've marginally improved over the 2.5 years I've been writing for the site. I've been trying hard to make the environment of the story feel as real as possible in character background and action so that the reader can just focus on the fantastical shrinking elements. In this case, acknowledging the presence of a giant guy was one way of doing that, without necessarily turning it into some twisted M/m scenario.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 12: Breaking Amends
Cannot wait for Maggie. I have been looking forward to her appearance. I wonder what she has planned since she set her clock early. Hope she has some awesome Ideas. Great chapter, and even though Kyle is a support character I do not see him helping Scott out at all. Kyle doesn't seem to be the sympathetic type, also I like how Scott uses the I was drunk so it wasn't my fault line. Most pwople would use this line and it pisses me off when they do. I hope he uses it with Judy or Maggie or both and see how they react. Maybe Kyle could say something to them about what Scott thinks. I can see both Judy and Maggie having a really bad reaction to that line.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Maggie has indeed got some pretty twisted ideas coming up. You are correct about Kyle, at least for now; despite his presence in the story as a "support" character, he has no intention of aiding Scott. And Scott would have to be pretty foolish to use that line around Judy or Maggie, though who knows what may slip out in the heat of the moment...
[Report This]Date: January 09 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life of the Party
Pretty good chapter... Can't wait for the next one... I hope it gets put up either tonight or tomorrow ... Ready to read more
Author's Response:
It'll be out soon, as I'm almost done with the revisions to the story. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 12: Breaking Amends
I'm not a fan of M/m, but I liked this chapter.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!(Which I hope comes out soon!) :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Judging by your username, you'll find a lot to like about the next chapter. ;)
[Report This]Date: January 06 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue
Great job again! The kiss part was very well done, and I like how Scott is 1 inch tall. I think that's the perfect size for him ;)
Really looking forward to Maggie making an appearance!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! You can probably expect to see Scott at 1 inch tall frequently in the future of this series.
Date: January 06 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue
Nothing you ever say or write will convince that the papers she's been working on aren't part of whatever surprise she's preparing...
Author's Response:
Not a bad guess. Keep in mind, too, that I'm not planning on revealing all of Judy's ploy during this particular story.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue
Great chapter always like the dream sequences, they kin of let us know more what the characters really want. Wow, this dream speaks alot. this sentence '“Thanks, Mommy,” Scott stated simply, a smile on his lips"' makes me wonder if he really want/wish that Jugy want put him in her mouth. I also cannot wait for maggie. I know she won't be quite so subtle in her "reasonable" requests and thats what I would like to see. I like Judy's cleverness, but Maggie seems (from the other stories) as if she would take the sruleness to a new level.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like the dreams. While Scott doesn't consciously want to be put in Judy's mouth, I certainly do want readers to wonder what's buried deep in his psyche. And Maggie's going to start things off with an unsubtle bang when she shows up, as you'll see soon.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue
Looking forward to see what happens next. Even if Judy won't be the main focal point. :(
aaron
PS not that I have a problem with Maggie though. :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Maggie's stepping up to bat soon, but Judy's still got one last appearance to make before this story ends.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life of the Party
I am a big fan of the dream sequences, as it allows you to do things to a chaacter that you don't plan to have them experince in "the real world." As you know, I'm a fan of the death-by-smelly-feet scenario, so if you're able and willing, maybe writing a dream sequence with that little scene at the feet of Judy or the sister would be great. Thanks for continuing this series.
Thanks for reading. Though this will be the only dream sequence in this story, there may be more down the road that explore ideas like that, given the heavy foot-focus of this series.
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[Report This]Date: January 03 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Little Smooch on the Cheek
Such a great update. Judy is everything I could ever want in a sexy giant milf. Can't wait to see what you have coming next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks much. I try to make Judy appealing despite how tyrannical she can be.
Date: December 31 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Little Smooch on the Cheek
Zephilia said it best.
Now I'll go and save the current version :)
[Report This]Date: December 30 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Little Smooch on the Cheek
I look forward to more of this(and possibly Julia or Carly) in 2014,
Good show my man, good show.
Thanks! Definitely count on more of this and Julia in the new year and, if the stars align and the heavens spit out a miracle, more Carly.
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[Report This]Date: December 30 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Little Smooch on the Cheek
Love the new chapter. and the last sentence "...current activity qualified as whatever surprise punishment his mother had in store..." has me thinking we'll meet her real nature soon and cannot wait to see what she has perpared for him. I also cannot wait for interaction between Scott and Maddie. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Scott and Maggie's interaction is coming up in one or two chapters. And Judy's definitely got more on her mind than appears on the surface, as will be seen in a later chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2013 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hitting the Spot
I've been following this series a while, and I would finally like to congratulate you on it. Your writing is very good, and I like your descriptions and use of Scott's perspective. I can picture exactly what's happening as I read :).
Also, that "Bruce Lee with a barrel of cocaine" sentence was the funniest thing I've read in a while xD
Nice job! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Sometimes I like to toss in little absurdities like the Bruce Lee line to help illustrate the sheer ridiculousness of a situation, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: December 28 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hitting the Spot
Love Judy.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: December 28 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 9: Hitting the Spot
I almost guessed what she would be doing this time, except that I didn't think she would have anything more specific than "sore/tired feet", and I was pretty sure she would complain about having to take he family to the trial rather than spending time working on the case.
But since you said you were curious to hear what we thought was going to happen, I'll try...
Short term, I thought that, since he's being punished 24/7, she'd make him take care of her shoes - she wouldn' have worn them so much on her own after all, and I wonder if she'd actually take them off while he's cleaning them :)
Long term, I have a couple of alternatives in mind:
- she takes care of him, which is pretty easy given his size, and gives her the excuse to remind him of everything she's doing for him, and therefore declare her requests "reasonable";
- she makes him wash him wash his clothes etc: that's a reasonable request by definition, and it gives her the chance to make things as easy (or difficult) as she pleases, and to judge how well he did.
If I had to bet, I'd pick option #1, but I think I'll wait and see what you have planned -- with so many variables involved (size, sister, ...) it's difficult to make correct predictions, and experience tells me it's worth to wait.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, and some interesting guesses there. Maggie's section is coming up soon, where I think readers are going to see the more intense action of the story, though Judy's still got some surprises up her sleeves, especially in later installments of the series.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hitting the Spot
Awesome chapter. I love the fact that Judy is a tall sexy milf with big sexy feet. Favorite toenail polish BTW. I'm into this story more so the its predecessors for some reason... I just can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
PS size 12 nice touch.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. The size 12 might sound a little extreme to some, but I really wanted to emphasize the sheer stature of Judy in both personality and physical size.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 9: Hitting the Spot
Great stuff, looking forward to seeing Maggie's return as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks! She's coming, I promise.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hitting the Spot
Great chapter, I kind of wished to see Judy more dominant, but I gues you have to start of slowley. I still want to see how his sister will treat him. I am also looking foeward to the day Judy cannot resist her domineering side and give up her subtleness and just makes him her and Maddies toy. No spelling or grammar errors, love your works, hope they keep coming.
Author's Response:
Patience on Judy! Things will get (comparatively) steamier in later stories. As for the sister, there's going to be significantly less understatement in her chapters. Thanks for reading/reviewing, it's much appreciated.