[Report This]Date: November 25 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
God there needs to be a sequel, I would like to see other ideas from Emily. Maybe she won't even need a boyfriend.
Date: November 24 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, if psychopathic women murdering one another is your thing (and I would assume so, based on your writing) then that movie might be something worth looking into. There's no shrinking of course, but it could be a source of inspiration for future stories. ;)
Noomi Rapace also stars in the "Girl with the Dragon Tattoo" movies which I haven't seen yet so I can't say anything about them one way or the other, but I've heard they are quite good...
As for the animal cruelty, I understood perfectly well what that ruling implies. The story isn't written in stone, and you can amend it however you see fit, but personally I understood your meaning well.
One other thing about adding insult to Lily's injuries, imagine how her family would have reacted by the verdict which dismisses their loved one as no more important than a mere animal. Emily could find pleasure in the fact that she not only destroyed Lily's life, but brought immeasurable pain and grief to her family, especially through the court's ruling that Lily was less than human. Oh, yes, and having her estate cover the legal fees too... especially if that meant the family was set to receive a significant inheritance, but instead it all goes to this bitch.
Date: November 23 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Did she have two infected men?
Author's Response:
Nope, just the one!
[Report This]Date: November 23 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Emily Frost is really in Shoop Da Whoop with Becky Strawberry and some other taints.
Also beyond that nonesense another great story from you little one.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2013 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Cool story. I'm picturing that the blond looks like Rachel McAdams and the Brunette looks like Noomi Rapace, because I just last night seen the movie "Passion" and your story with the feud between a blond and brunette woman reminded me of that.
But sadly you are exactly right that the Papparazzi would do exactly as you described. I have no doubt about that at all. They are in it for the pictures and the money, and if someone is seriously injured or killed they would be all the more happy about it. Like what they did with Princess Diana, for example. They are the real true sociopaths in this story; perhaps even moreso than Emily herself.
Forced to live as a piece of living jewelry is a cool fate. Its a shame this didn't happen with Lily. If you think about it she got off pretty easy, because she was squished and gone. End of story. But this guy has to suffer like this for who knows how long. But I suppose that would have been more difficult for her to get away with (especially with the Papparazzi documenting it).
And speaking of her getting away with it, the "animal cruelty" basis is interesting. It could have also perhaps been ruled as "self defense" because of the threats (real, or alleged); or that she simply didn't even see her as she stepped on her. With enough money and the right legal team any defense probably would have worked I guess. A good insult to injury would have been if Lily's estate had been forced to pay the legal fees. ;)
Author's Response:
I looked them up! And I only recognized one, but they're both pretty! So sure, it could be them!
The animal cruelty and general blasé towards the concept of shrinking is a reference to the Inhuman universe stuff I've got going on, but I totally forgot to make mention of that and I hate when stories expect you to have read other stories in order to know what they're talking about >.< I'M SO SORRY PAST AND FUTURE READERS OF THIS STORY, THAT'S MY BAD.
That said, Lily's estate paying Emily's legal fees is hilarious and I love it.