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Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 7:53 PM Title: Remembrance part 3

Another great chapter, hopuing we haven't seen the last of Chi-Chi



Author's Response:

Oh dont worry i plan on using certain aspects of last chapter later on >)

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 8:42 AM Title: Open for business

Very deep and well written back story! Good job! Love it

Reviewer: voredom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2014 3:16 PM Title: Open for business

Discussing the alliance and forming of an unstoppable empire?



Author's Response:

so basicly the thunderking plot :P but yea i can probable manage that lol.

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2014 9:13 AM Title: Open for business

How about a batch of gnomes being bought for entertainment at a zandalari troll meeting. Most of them are huge, even for troll standards, so seeing such a size difference could be interesting.



Author's Response:

hmm sounds like a good idea now just need to figuer out what the meeting would be about lol

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 11:20 PM Title: Open for business

Another great chapter what can I say, can't wait for the rest of the backstory!

Reviewer: Bookworm88 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 7:05 PM Title: Bouncy

Really good work so far, would love to see more with that pandarin woman, the violent ones are good

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 5:46 PM Title: Open for business

For ideas , how about something like pathfinder or D&D? Not many iconic characters, but plenty of fantasy creatures to write about.

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 12:09 PM Title: Open for business

Cliffhanger! ;(. Love the chapter tho!

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 3:29 AM Title: Remembrance

Loved this chapter. It was good to see some backstory, and here's hoping chi-chi continues to make appearances.

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 4:44 AM Title: Narcissism

Loved this chapter. Enjoy butt domination anyways, but role reversal as well? Beautiful. As an idea for a future chapter, how about Nixxie being shrunk down a bit more for some playful dominance by Chi-Chi?

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 12:00 PM Title: Open for business

well now I have to review. I like every CH so far. Every ch is a 10/10 to me.
If I had a request it would be if u make a follow up chapter on a previous character.

Author's Response:

i might just, ive had great responces to Chi-Chi so far

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 3:51 PM Title: Open for business

Agree love Chi Chi! Another great chapter! More!!!

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 6:14 PM Title: Open for business

I am not entirely sure what I think about this story. But it is good and I would love to see more. (:

And on an unrelated topic about your bio. That movie got a lot of people hooked myself included.

 

Anyway excellent story keep it up. 



Author's Response: Glad to hear it :D hope I can keep people interested :)

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 3:37 PM Title: Open for business

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Better than what I had imagined in my head when I suggested it!!!!!! What a way to ring in the New Year!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10 Chapter



Author's Response:

Glad i made your chapter special :D

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2013 5:36 PM Title: Open for business

Can't wait for moarrrrrrr!! 😄

Reviewer: Bookworm88 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 4:19 AM Title: Open for business

Love your work so far, the violent ones are great. Maybe something with a Tauren or something class related

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 6:18 PM Title: Open for business

Wow I didn't even think of pandaren. That was a fun chapter! Poor lucky gnomes lol

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2013 11:52 AM Title: Open for business

WOW

Please, i wanna read next chapter

NOW

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 11:19 PM Title: Open for business

Great Chapter, also your troll chapter was very good also! Just didn't have time to review. I also agree with the previous poster, you can go from violent to gentle really well, can write both styles. I'll think up a request if noone else does as I want this to continue ^^

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 10:02 PM Title: Happy Hour

Yeah was a good chapter, I like your writing style. Plus you know how to be gentle and kind, then spice things up with violence.

This chapter reminds me of the Hobbit. Which I still need to go see, well nice job writing, can't wait for more.

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