Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 2:21 PM Title: Sumo ring

Okay, I absolutely hate people who review this way. Do you think this encourages him/her? Jesus christ man, be supportive otherwise they won't ever write again. Okay, anyways, what he/she said may be rude and blunt, but he/she is not wrong. Your story moves way to fast and each scene lacks detail. I'm thrown from one scene to the next before I even understand what's happening. Keep trying though!