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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2013 2:42 AM Title: Getting back home

Good stuff, curious to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Ccc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2013 4:59 PM Title: The wheels on the bus

I'am loving the story and her sadism,I would like to see someone or a group being crushed by her mom bare soles (arch,toeor heel would be awesome,but the story is yours).Please

Reviewer: Sora Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2013 7:28 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

I loved that last chapter Christi! So erotic and cruel how Stacy uses her ass.. and I loved how you showed them witnessing her asshole from their little house point of view! So dirty and I love it.. Please keep up the great work! 

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2013 7:19 PM Title: House moving

:) I like where this is going. Cruel is good

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2013 8:44 AM Title: House moving

She's becoming quite the little terror.

 

Well done.

Reviewer: alee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 11:32 PM Title: The wheels on the bus

I personally like the whole people trapped in a car or a bus or something, it really is kinda my taste. But yeah u hv to develop a character or two just to keep them for a bit while stacy goes on a rampage. 

P.S is she gonna be shrinking planes, a train, ships or something too?;)

Also she can keep multiple ppl as prisoners, like balled into her fists, that wud also make anyone feel powerfull and its also a way for a long term torture. 

THUMBS UP nevertheless and plzzzz keeep updating daily :)



Author's Response:

I also like when groups of people are trapped in cars and such but i wouldn't say that it is my favorite thing. in a later chapter i'll be sure to have a good train or bus shrinkage with nice descriptions =) right now i don't think she will be shrinking anything to major as she wants to keep a low prfile and are only going after people she personally wants to abuse.

updating daily is hard. especially now as i have exams going on in university. the only reason i updated three times in one day was because i was sick and wanted to pass the time writing. thanks for you compliments, and i hope you enjoy watching =)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 6:34 PM Title: The wheels on the bus

Pretty good stuff.



Author's Response:

thanks.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 4:19 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

I'd rather leave the details to you, but something like stacy puts a target on some toilet paper where they get pushed into some unaware giantesses urethra only to be washed out later in the day, or placed on a stick of deodorant or in clothes and is caught up stuck to an unaware girl's skin as she does sports or something.

But yeah, just thinking out loud. I wanna see where you take the story next. Looking firward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 8:18 AM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

When I read the ending of chapter two I just had to write. The ultra-micro shrink and the nose death... so good. I'd've loved to see some more detail on that, but the brevity works well. That kind of extreme shrinking, plus some unusual bodilu functions or unaware situations (placed by the main character, shrunk to almost nothing, and then an unaware encounter... so great. I'm really excited to see what comes next. I vote for some ultra-micro unaware asshole interaction, or failing that urethra or armpit would be interesting, if hard to set up. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

thankyou for your kind words and don't worry there will definitely be asshole interaction in an upcoming chapter as i really loved asshole and butt. Also, what exactly to you mean by urethra and armpit specifically. Is there anything you specifically want to see?

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 4:20 AM Title: The wheels on the bus

hey man. Once she shrinks michael, make her keep him as a pet instead of killing him. You know, because she likes tormenting and babying him more than anyone else and grows attached to tiny michael.

Author's Response:

sorry, i'm afraid i can't do that.

1) i already have big plans for micheal in a chapter that i suspect i'm going to love.

2) growing attached to people just isn't stacy's personality.

sorry again man.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 11:11 PM Title: Problem students

I really like ur creative endings for the people. I havent seen many nose death before but I liked it. Thanks for writing these



Author's Response:

i really do like wierd and gross endings often through natural bodily function. nose, ear eyes, they are all strange and kind of gross ways to die (well, except the eye which is pretty clean but it's still unusual). anyway, if you have any creative deaths you'd like to read don't be shy to verbally demand them with capslocks =) of course the deaths also have to be in character but you get what i mean.

Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 10:59 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

Awesome start, man! I hope ther will be some unaware scenerios involving other unaware people crushing, in-shoe stuff!



Author's Response:

of course there'll be unaware, i LOVE unaware ... most of the time. yeah, i'm thinking of doing some unaware with the mother as her daughter uses her to get rid of people. anyway, thanks for the compliments and i hope you continue to enjoy =)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 9:53 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

Loving it, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, man!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 4:52 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

This is such a great start full of action and potential. I'm looking forward to the vore.



Author's Response:

thanks! yeah, i have so many ideas for this story and a few of them contain vore so don't worry.

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