[Report This]Date: May 25 2022 4:43 PM Title: Nervous Breakdown
This is a great story you have here. The development of the relationship between Kate and Emma has been very realistic, in a way that a lot of stories don't get right. Sad that this story is long abandoned, but at least what we got was very good.
Date: February 16 2016 9:16 PM Title: Prologue: The Last Ride Home
@Little Twitch. Hope you are able too, good luck.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 12:17 AM Title: Prologue: The Last Ride Home
This looks like a very beautiful story. Too bad it is never going to finish.
Author's Response:
I promise that it will be finished in the future. :) I've had several health issues arise which lead to the delay in updates. Thank you for being patient <3
Date: January 02 2014 9:37 AM Title: Prologue: The Last Ride Home
I forgot to ask this, but how did she escape?
Author's Response:
Stay tuned. ;)
Date: January 01 2014 10:32 PM Title: Nervous Breakdown
I just read this chapter and the previous one. I really like the way you are slowly building their relationship. It wouldn't make sense for Emma to instantly trust Kate. Also, I think Emma's reactions bathing seem spot on.
The only thing that confused me was Emma being surprised that Kate was human. I assumed she knew she was shrunk, not in another place with giant people.
Author's Response:
Very good for catching this! This will actually be explained in the next couple of chapters. ;)
Date: December 31 2013 9:14 AM Title: Nervous Breakdown
^_^
Date: December 29 2013 3:37 PM Title: Kathryn Harvest
O.O
A tear!
Dun, dun, dun
[Report This]Date: December 29 2013 2:27 PM Title: Kathryn Harvest
Ok, this is definitely one of my favourite stories in a long time! This chapter is deliciously cute and was posted so quickly! What a treat!
Emma and Kate are so adorable together. And I'm really liking Kate so far; I love how you've written her gentleness and the interaction between the two. Gah! Its so freaking adorable! I'm really looking forward to further chapters.
And kudos on the writing, I'm loving your style. It has a nice flow to it and its very easy to picture.
Date: December 28 2013 11:23 PM Title: Prologue: The Last Ride Home
Okay, here's the deal. I barely log onto here. Mostly I just come to the website and read then leave. I felt the need to log on to tell you that this story is phenominal. Seriously, one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Please keep this story moving
Author's Response:
Oh my goodness! Thank you SO much for your wonderful words, dear! I'm so glad that you are enjoying it. :D I've just added another chapter and my hope is to, indeed, keep the story moving! Thanks again! <3
Date: December 28 2013 1:39 PM Title: Revealing
Excellent story so far! You can't help but feel sorry for poor Emma. I just hope Kate is as nice as she appears to be and doesn't turn out to be some twisted person.
Really looking forward to the next chapters. Awesome job so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3
Date: December 28 2013 8:48 AM Title: Revealing
Nice read! What is with the rest of the bus? What kind of giants found them??? Keep up the good work! I like the story aready. curtis
Author's Response:
All will be revealed in time. ;) Thank you! <3
Date: December 27 2013 11:45 PM Title: Revealing
Inchy, I really liked this chapter. Particularly the way you handled the scene at the table. Oh and the hazel eyes (my favorite).
-Cron
Author's Response:
Hehe. Thank you, Cron dear! <3 Hazel eyes are particularly nice. Tho, I do have an array of different eyes coming up...
Date: November 11 2013 6:33 AM Title: Wet Dreams
Oh no she din't!
Date: November 10 2013 7:16 PM Title: Prologue: The Last Ride Home
very well done. emma is very relateable. i just want to hug her and take her home. she seems so fun, but so sad at the same time. more please.
Date: November 10 2013 3:31 AM Title: Prologue: The Last Ride Home
OF course, the police show up and all hell breaks lose! haha, I'm liking the story so far. You're writing style is fluid and enjoyable. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Doesn't it always?
Though... who said anything about it being the police? ;) Stay tuned to find out...
[Report This]Date: November 10 2013 12:35 AM Title: Prologue: The Last Ride Home
This is off to a great start, especially with Emma living in a rabbit hole. Makes you want to see good things happen to her... bad things too.
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much. I haven't written a story in a long time and was afraid to post this one... thank you for the confidence booster! :) Will chapter 2 soon!