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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Sorry; but I just have to say it. This chapter was IMMENSELY great!

;-D

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow!  This is amazing, I can easily visualize these scenes playing out, your discription's  are so greatly detailed.   Great writing style! 

Bob sounds like a guy that wants to be shrunk, hopefully he'll get his wish?  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great flashback! I wonder if he ever lost the Big V to Stacy? ;-D

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Date: November 08 2013 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hmmmmmm! It appears we have two sets of still water running deep. And, chapter three will no doubt be their confluence. ;-)

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

So far pretty amazing. Very detailed. I love it. Hopefully you can add some butt crush in it or just butt action in it from his wife and her sister, maybe even his mother in law.Then the story will be perfect!!! :). Booty booty booty rocking everywhere lol

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