Giantess World
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Reviewer: Shrunken Guy Signed 
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Date: October 25 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter One
[Report This]Date: October 25 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter One
I feel there were gaps in between certain of parts of this story. For example, you could've explaijned the car ride from the store to Alyssa's home.
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2007 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. There are other good writers out there, though, who actually know from plot. NFalc springs to mind, of course, and you're not so bad a writer yourself. ;)
[Report This]Date: January 15 2007 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story demonstrates best why you are the best of the best. You do such a good job weaving in plot with entertainment.
You do perhaps the best job of writing good stories first and foremost. Which in this community is a rarity. So often we see stories that lean so heavily towards the fetish side of things you can hardly find a plot.
I definately am looking forward to seeing the rest this story and the conclusion to the scenes from a transforming world. I was also happy that scott chelgren made an appearance.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. There are other good writers out there, though, who actually know from plot. NFalc springs to mind, of course, and you're not so bad a writer yourself. ;)