Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 8:21 PM Title: The High Priestess

 Wow, Abolition movement? We'll see if she still feels the same way after the ceremony.

Author's Response:

That was mentioned way, way back, all the way in the first chapter.

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 1:14 PM Title: The Coronation Part 2

With this and the other story set in this universe, how red spice makes these women bloodthristy has always bothered me and does make it hard at times to fully enjoy the story.  It makes me wonder how the population can continue in this world if the men are treated like garbage.  I'd be running for the hills and hiding.  And forbidding spice in those regions that men still control.  Anyways, the ray of hope in this story was Livia.  But with her talk with her mother a couple of chapters back, I'm going to assume that this gentle giantess will probably become just as violent and bloodthirsty as all the others.  Still the story is well writtten and is compelling enough to hold my interest, despite my discomfort.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your input. I've put a lot of thought into trying to maintain a balance here, and I think I have a solution that will please most readers. I don't want to go into any more detail, for fear of spoilers, but I think I've found a good middle path. Livia will become more conflicted, more gray, but she's not going to turn into her sister any time soon.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2014 9:27 PM Title: The Coronation Part 2

Oh my, now we'll see the true madness begin. Nice twist, I actually believed this was the real ceremony.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad the sleight of hand worked.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad the sleight of hand worked.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 2:34 PM Title: The Coronation Prelude

Nice to see an update. I like the story so far, but I think you really dragged that gladiator fight on longer than it should've been. It took up about two thirds of the story so far.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 5:50 AM Title: The Fight Part I

Love the story, you can actually see what is happening. I really hope you decide to finish this story. I would love to see what happens between Julia and the Gladiatrix.

Reviewer: Tiacoten11 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 6:43 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

 

Fantastic story. I love the world you have created and how you rewrite the History. Characters personalities are well defined, and I love all of them.

Another aspect I would like to highlight is that you keep the story very well balanced, I mean, there are all kind of material in its measure.

I´m a big giantess lover, like 50-60 feets or more, so I specially like the parts with this kind of giantesses. I also like vore more than another fetish. Those are the reasons why my fourite character is Cybele.

It would be amazing if you write a story of a Roman Banquet that were so common in these days, but, most important, I hope you keep it up and just go the same way as heretofore. As I said, fantastic story.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 9:16 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

I have just read (and amended a little of...) the two parts of your story. I am not a lover of gigantic females...too fairy-story-like for me, ergo, I am, for my pleasure, changing the scenario to make it more realistic. The females, and girls alike, shall be 10 feet tall, and the males shall become a staple diet.

I cannot accept that many readers can get excited by such colossal girls. Well, there are those few that are... those who have given their comments. 

                       Realistically yours....A.B.  U.K. 

Reviewer: Rage Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2013 1:56 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Great story, love the attention given to all fetishes( I'm boob man myself so loved the part with kim), not just the authors favourite-the main downfall of stores on here. 

Can't wait for the next chapter so keep up the writing:) 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'll try to have the next chapter up soon.

Reviewer: AlterniaGuy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 6:34 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Fantastic story. I appreciate the fact that you seem to care about the plot of your story just as much as the fetish parts, which is something I don't often find on here.

My only suggestion is that you try to add at least a few foot focused scenes (and by that I mean something as drawn out as your breast scenes rather than just a simple crush). While I understand that you personally are not into it, you should understand that most people here are, as feet are the most common fetish among males. It is your story and you are by no means required to accommodate all of your readers, but if you are really looking for a well-rounded story that will blow your readers away, it helps to include things that will please all audiences.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'll take your advice into consideration. Feet aren't really my thing, but I realize a lot of people on these sites are into them. I'll try and have more detailed foot interaction scenes in the future.

*As for feet being the most popular fetish... well, if breast attraction is considered a fetish, then it easily outstrips feet attraction as the most popular fetish. That said, since breasts are a secondary sexual characteristic, it's questionable whether or not they count as a fetish. There's some debate among sexual psychologists about whether breast and butt attraction should be considered fetishes, and the general consensus seems to be that they shouldn't. 

Reviewer: WordSmith Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 8:50 AM Title: The Gladiatrix Part 2

Forgot to rate it so here we go ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, WordSmith!