Date: May 05 2015 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice story. Looking forward to more Kelsey. This should be fun. America needs a Goddess.
Date: April 19 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Cool story. Nice premise.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
I didn't read this story when it first came out because I hadn't seen pacific rim at the time. Now that I have seen it... twice. I think I'm prepared enough to give a review.
Lets see now. I'm liking the female perspective you've got going on here. it could use improvement, but its a believable women as far as I can see.
Good job Dingy Bingy.
Date: January 23 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
I thought I was the only other person who watched giant monster movies (including Pacific Rim) and who wished that there were giant people in them. This story is intriguing so far so I hope you continue!
Author's Response:
Good to see a new review for this story! Nope, you're definitely not alone!
I'm still really not sure how I feel about writing this story in the first person. I've been thinking about trying it with third person... I don't know. Any thoughts on this?
Date: November 22 2013 9:25 PM Title: Prologue
Hey as long as you have a plan :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, yeah I've worked one out, haha
[Report This]Date: November 22 2013 5:56 PM Title: Prologue
I agree. Sou should continue from here.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, I plan to write another chapter for this thing soon.
Date: November 22 2013 11:52 AM Title: Prologue
I see you have admitted to running out of steam, my advice is, you have a decent foundation, write down some plot points and really think about each chapter and how they will come together, always start with a begining and an end goal. I'd give you a nine of ten for description
Author's Response:
Yeah, I am sort of running out of steam on my other story. I have many more chapters fully planned out for it and little notes typed up so I don't forget to include certain things I'm excited about, but each chapter takes me longer and longer to wrap up. I guess you could say that I'm just taking a break from it right now. During this break, I'll probably work a little on other stories like this one here, and a I've had a few other ideas so I could start another new one at some point as well.
Date: November 21 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your off to a good start I'd say, seems like there may be a slight bit of jealousy going on here between the sisters. Could get interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: November 21 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Do carry on , this intrigues me very much! If you can finish this story, it should be pretty good. What tests? Is Kelsey going to turn evil or stay gentle? Will Jessica covet being a giantess so much that she turns herself into one against everyone else's wish?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, glad to hear someone's interested. As for all those questions... you wouldn't want me to answer them so soon, would you? haha.
Date: October 28 2013 3:42 AM Title: Prologue
It is odd that the giantess in question would want to be shrunk. Nice start, hope your not losing steam on big problems pending though.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
As for Big Problems Pending, I'm afraid I am losing steam. I'm still quite excited about it and I have a lot of things planned, but I'm definitely losing steam and it's taking longer and longer to write.
Date: October 27 2013 7:11 PM Title: Prologue
Lots of questions here! Why is she so big? Why is she being shrunk down? Is she gentle or evil? I hope my queries are answered!
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks for the review! I've got a plan going on where I'd like to take this story. If I wind up getting to work on writing deeper into it, those questions will definitely be answered!