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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Favorite parts are when Icarus is smaller, like around the size he is now. And when Icarus and Terra, spent time with each other. And when Terra teases Icarus.

Least favorite thing, would have to be short chapters. I can't think of a bad part.

I think Icarus use to be a prince, that's how he has all these memories.
His sphere is like his core or chakra. Since he is connected to Terra. She can control his magic etc.

A request would have to be.... Maybe have a break or side story that's a couple of chapters. Where Terra and Icarus go to a hot spring and have some fun. Plus Icarus is still a couple of inches tall.

Two secret that Icarus can never know. Is what happened in the fire at the castle place. And how much Terra weighs.

The treasures abilities, are like protection, strength.,increase size and decrease, replenish magic. Basically any super power you can think of.

Well this is my longest review. I really like the chapter. Icarus he sure doesn't know how to stay out of trouble.
Terra teases Icarus a lot, you should have Icarus give her a taste of her own medicine.

Thanks for the chapter, have a nice night or morning or afternoon. Whenever you read this review :)

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 22

ok well i have not reviewed this story and im srry bout tht, cause i really love this story. By far one of my favs right now. so on to answer some questions

Fav moment was when Icarus looked backed at terra when he freed her.not sure if this really was my fav but to me he did alot for her, a stranger.

I think icarus is like some sort of...idk lol he does seem to know a lot of elven things tho.

the treasures probaly have some op abilities than inhance the senses of the user.

i think his sphere is like his soul. thts why he reacts to it.ps hope terra plays with it more.

one request i have is tht terra gets more aggressive in trying to get icarus to like her. not mean tho.

not sure about the other questions tho. need more time to think on those.

again i love everything about this story. maybe terra and icarus can have more fun together with their size difference

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wohoo! Thanks man!



Author's Response: No prob

Reviewer: combine44 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 22

What is your most/least favorite moment in this entire story: Terra freeing Icarus from his former owner
Who/what do you think Icarus is: Maybe the last decendent of an elf king?
Who/what do you think Raphael is: No idea
What abilities could each treasure have: No idea
What is Icarus’ Sphere: His soul
If you had one request for the story what would it be: Terra grows :)
What theories do you guys have: None
What are the two secrets that Icarus can never know: No Idea



Author's Response: All I can say is that one of your answers is correct and another will happen.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

Terra's mom will probably make Terra feel small, half giant should make her....half size?



Author's Response: Maybe O.o

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

I probably would have chosen option 1. The other option seemed painful.

Another wonderful chapter, it's taking Icarus awhile to grow back to regular height. Not that it's a bad thing.

Author's Response: Thanks for being a constant reviewer!

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2014 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

Willing to bet money that Terra's mother is a giantess. She is half giant after all. Wonder if she needs relationship advice?

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm surprised that this story doesn't have at least 100 reviews by now. As all the needs to a great story, plus the extra stuff.
I guess I'll help you with getting to that 100 mark. Favorite parts of these chapters is when Tara, teases Icarus. Plus they'd make a good couple later on.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

Huh. I hope this doesnt get in the way of my suggestion

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

These relaxed bonding chapters are my favorite, especially if Terra is being playfully sexy!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

He shrunk? Must be from using too much power!

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

Hey, i sent you an email with a suggestion. Could you please respond and tell me what you think?

Author's Response: Can you resend the email? I can't find it. The address is lancealot501@hotmail.com

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 19

This story keeps getting better and better. Are you going to keep him smaller. For a couple of chapters?

Author's Response: Yeah, it'll take a week to grow back to normal so we'll see what happens to him for the next few chapters

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

Cool. He shrunk and now they're going to visit her family. Hope her mom is a sexy milf who's taller than her. Great story btw and I'm looking forward to more.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

Damn. This is intense. Wonder if the empty clothing means that Icarus has shrunk? Great story btw sorry I don't review as often as I should.

aaron

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

You left that last part blank didn't you? So we would know only when the moment was right.



Author's Response: You are correct about leaving out the last part of his speech. The two things that are left out will play a big part later to come.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

Sounds likd the plot to a really cool videogame.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you, thank you for the paragraphs. Made reading so much more enjoyable. Plus with the great characteristics the story already has.

It funny and cool, seeing the emotion wheel. That Terra and Icarus go through together. Happy, sad, mad, a bunch of humor.

Reviewer: Teemo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2014 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love your story! :D



Author's Response: Thanks XD

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well thanks for the quick update. Once again awesome chapter. With the quick updates i can ignore the block chapters.

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