[Report This]Date: January 12 2020 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Great story! I sort by recently added, so I am very lucky and happy that I caught this. I’m very glad you decided to return to this story. I am a fairly long time lurker, so sorry if this is not the most helpful review. Would love to see more intimate moments between Terra and Icarus, especially at a reduced size like he was earlier in the story. Overall it’s great and I like the pacing. I really hope you decide to continue updating the story. Cheers! :D
[Report This]Date: January 09 2020 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 41
No way! Glad your continuing this story!
Date: January 09 2020 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 40
Wow,an update! Great to see you writing again!
Date: January 09 2020 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 40
Yay!! You’ve returned. Glad to see you back and to see a little bit of Terra’s past growth as a person in this chapter. Look forward to reading more!!!
Date: May 08 2018 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Saw this come up on the front page and realised I kind of missed this one. Hope you'll go back to it one day.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2016 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 39
Excellent story. I just read the entire thing. Not sure I've ever read a giantess story with such a Tolkien feel. Feels like a true adventure, traveling from place to place, sometimes barely surviving, taking care of each other. Both Terra and Icarus have their strengths and weaknesses. They complement each other amazingly. Both get jealous from time to time, but both care more about the well-being of the other. I like how Icarus is still emabarrased and outwardly reluctant when it comes to intimacy, and Terra respects his desires, never pushing him too far too fast. I also like how you limit their powers. There is a very real possibility either of them could get seriously injured or die, and that heightens the tension, making the time they have together that much more special.
Author's Response: Thanks for the very long review! Really glad that you like the story so far. Both characters have their own strengths and weaknesses but they try to cover each other as best as they can. There are actually a few hints throughout the story that reveal more about Icarus than what we are directly told.
Date: August 27 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Wish I found this story earlier, I love the how the sexual intercourse between Icarus and terra doesn't dominate 95% of the story, can't wait to c what happens next, keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Really glad that you are enjoying it. If you want to learn a bit more about some history in this universe then take a glance at my other story The Exia Chronicles.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2016 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 37
This. This is why I read your stories. Excellent stuff, lance.
Date: August 02 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
I take back everything I said about this story not having so much gts content. This is perfect! That being said, I like the development so far- the sphere is an interesting object and there's a lot of mystery to keep us interested but not so much as to overwhelm. Great stuff lancealot.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 37
Well, now: I've caught up a bit to this chapter (37), and I'm still hanging in and enjoying your writing.
A note here... You're probably writing a bit fast at times, so you don't notice that you sometimes forget to complete a word (like forgetting to add -ed to a past tense verb). It's not too serious here, but if you want to write professionally, you need to proof-read your product. Granted, you'll probably have an editor for that, and that's one of his jobs to ensure that the quality is where it should be. But it is a good habit to develop yourself. It will help you avoid such things in the future.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 35
Heja, lancealot501:
Just a quick comment about supporting you... You deserve it for writing so well!
I've been off line quite a lot lately, so I have to catchup again. I'll comment again after another chapter or two.
Author's Response: Really glad that people are enjoying it. I've written the pass few chapters faster than I wanted to but ill try to keep the errors to a minimum.
Date: June 22 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Lol well fuck, that is adorable. Gorgeous interaction between these two.
Author's Response: Really glad you liked it.
Date: June 22 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loving this so far. Hard to believe i never saw this before.
Date: June 21 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 37
Nice exposition about the immune systems of the different races, giants and dwarves being more resistant than the others.
Author's Response: A lot of information was given out this chapter; Dwarven waterfall, immune systems, Icarus' abilities and mysterious knowledge. The next chapter should have even more information that you guys would find useful. After that would be a fun relaxing chapter that everyone would enjoy. Truthfully I'm probably going to go on a week or two hiatus. I've written 5 chapters and haven't got that much feedback. Maybe after a few weeks I'll release another chapter and see how it is received from there. Until then thanks for the review!
Date: June 19 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
nice update!
[Report This]Date: April 11 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 35
good to have you back. though i wonder, why did you change nyarls fighting style?
Author's Response: We haven't seen Nyarl really fighting though. The most we have seen so far is that he is incredibly strong despite his size. We haven't seen his speed either because it's impossible to out maneuver Terra when she is wearing the sacred boots. We'll see more of him later though.
Date: April 11 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Oh now we have dwarves? I like the direction this is going, especially since we're going to learn more about Terra; the dwarves seem to know her.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
my bad for being quiet on this story. To be honest I love this story alot, ive read in full in the last few years a good amound of times. I love these adventure stories and yours is one of my favs.
im glad you pick this story back up and im hopeing to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, it really means a lot to know that somebody likes your story enough to read it every once in a while.
Date: April 09 2016 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
yes! thanks for the update and love the series!
Date: September 19 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
That's OK. It's not a situation I can't live with... I have been known to make a few errors myself, usually spelling mistakes. Even a professional can't be perfect (as far as I know!) Keep on doing the good work. I love your stories, especially since I don't seem to be able to write creative work myself anymore. (I did a few dozen years ago, but my first 30 years of marriage cured me of that.)
Cheers.