[Report This]Date: February 11 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hiya, been meaning to read this for a while, but only just got round to it. Very well done by the way :) I really liked the change of pace to have a slow build up to the shrinking, without it taking a million chapters to get to the fun (unlike some of the more confusingly popular stories around here), and the writing was fluid with a good level of imaginative description.
Its nice to have some good F/f stories on here as they are exceedingly rare!
I hope you dont get put off by a lack of feedback around here, unfortuantely its the nature of these sites recently. People either Lurk, or only ever comment on the Mods or "popular people's" stuff, but there will always be someone out there who apreciates the hard work good writers go to :)
Hope you are thinking of writing more for this ^_^