Date: January 05 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
But wasn't said earlier that the invulnerability wears off? Did Cheryl forget to mention this in the hopes that Mark would get killed? Would Emily believe him if he told her? Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
All will be revealed in time my friend! Thanks for reading!
Date: January 05 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
That last line makes me wonder if Mark will try to hurt her. She isn't is a very telling choice of words where he could have said he is small and weak while she is huge and powerful.
Since Emily might shove him into places like her pussy, he could take advantange of being inside her and start breaking stuff. It'll be a sight if he kills or maims Emily.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! Lots of things that I like here.
First, Emily's curiosity. I like how she tested the crushing on Mark, so now she knows her limits and can punish him confidently without feeling bad if she broke his bones or soemthing.
Second, Mark's arguement failed against Emily, so she has no reason not to play with Mark. She can do as she pleases.
Third, I like Emily's creativity using dental floss. Tying up his legs and connecting them to her finger gives Emily control and she then knows his location. Also, I look forward to when she ties him up to other places as well.
Now that they understand each other, I cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 18: Part IV
Always loved the name Abs, I even like the name Abigail but for some reason I'm not fond of Abby(weird).
Anyways, glad to see this story back as I've enjoyed reading from Abby's perspective, will we get to see things from a giantess' perspective?
Even though Cheryl is heartless because she's taken away Mark and Abby's humanity, she makes an awesome giantess as well as sexy lesbian. Can't wait to see what her mom has in store for tiny Mark.
As always I love the dialog and descriptions. And the part where Cheryl wants to reveal her tiny toys to Lauren but is hesitant about it. Like how Abby has to go against all her better judgment to see this plan through(only because she feels Lauren won't take advantage of them as Cheryl and her mom have). That is leading up quite nicely to something between those three but of course it's what I've been waiting for..
More sexy and horny milf action.
Great story!!
aaron
PS I'm actually glad that only Abby and Mark are the only tinies because that way the giantesses can be more intimate with them. Although it would be sexy if Cheryl shrunk Lauren too. Maybe not as tiny but maybe like 2".
[Report This]Date: January 02 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18: Part IV
You were right, you did post around New Years. Happy New Year!
Anyway, that was a long night for Abby. I even read the last 5 chapters just to see where we last left off with Mark.
Chapter 16 featured Cheryl leaving Mark with Emily and Emily began discussing sexy torture methods that would love to see happen. Then chapter 17 included Emily taking Mark to her room.
Its a cliffhanger so good, that I cant wait that we finally can get back to Mark. My favorite idea from chapter 16 was Emily sewing Mark to her panties. Hopefully Emily keeps her promise.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 18: Part III
Wow, fantastic chapter!
Lauren had no idea what she was doing. Cheryl distracted her enough.
Back to back chapters. Didnt see that coming. Im crossing my fingers for a back to back to back chapter. lol
Im starting to get anxious about what Emily is doing to Mark. She said some interesting ideas from chapter 16. Everytime Abby thinks of Mark, I also think of Mark. We both want to know what is happeneing to him.
Seems like this Abby/Cheryl scene is about to end, and what a situation it was. It was intense on multiple levels.
Hoping the next scene with Emily and Mark is just as detailed, or even better!
Once again, another great chapter, and I cant wait for the next one, which might be sooner than I think. (I hope) :)
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, the next chapter won't be at least til new Year I'm afraid! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Expect more soon...
[Report This]Date: December 24 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 18: Part III
Holy sex orgies batman!! That chapter was what I was hoping for and you did not disappoint. Great job. Cannot wait to see what happens next. Also loved how Cheryl's pretty feet were mentioned as in foreshadowing(one can only hope).
All in all I'm so stocked that this story is back and that we getting a lot from Abby's perspective. I of course want to see more of the hot milf(forget her name) but you just do what you do. This story is excellent and I hate for something to disrupt your rhythm.
aaron
PS absolutely loved it when Abby had to use all her strength just to escape Cheryl's vagina lips.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 18: Part II
Welcome back! and Merry Christmas to you too!
This chapter almost feels like a christmas present.
Great chapter with lots of detail. Poor Abby, she is literally lost in there and now she has to deal with Lauren making moves unaware of Abby's presence.
I expect more dialogue next chapter, but this one had phenomenal descriptions! Especially while understanding Abby's perespective.
Cant wait for Mark's part!
Author's Response:
This is maybe the third/fourth draft of this particular chapter and I did originally have some dialogue in it, but I felt having Abby buried in flesh didn't give her much room to speak, and as for Cheryl, she was talking fine! Abby just couldn't hear her haha. But, expect much more dialogue in the next chapter!
Thank you for you kind words, and have a great holiday.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18: Part I
It's amazing how many ways a mouth can be described!
So many details!
It makes me want to read the next chapter right now.
I'm assuming that there will be a part 2 with Cheryl, and then the following chapter will begin Emily's fun.
It's going to be a wild ride.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 18: Part I
I really like how you're writing this from a different characters perspective. It's brought new life in this story for me. At any rate I'm delighted to see this story back. You're one hell of a writer and I'm enjoying this story immensely.
aaron
[Report This]Date: October 25 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad to see this story is back, I didn't review it last time, but it is definitely up there in quality. It is amazing how descriptive you can be with your writing, it's like I'm there seeing the whole thing happen. I really hope you continue this story!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes you are back! thank you!
Emily sounds so sexy with her whispers and ideas. Even the ones about tying Mark up are fantastic, and I cant wait to see what happens next!
Cheryl has been tormenting Abby for a while now. Or it seems like it.
I hope Emily brings a new treatment to add to this story. It seems to be getting better and better.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: October 25 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really hope you'll continue this story , it's been a long time since you updated and I think it deserves more. Our heroes are probably screwed, Lauren seems to be unaware of all of this.
Date: October 25 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
It's great to see you back!! short but nice chapter...hope to see some vore action soon :)
Author's Response:
It's great to be back after so long! Great to see you're still reading :)
Date: July 25 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Haha, your reply to my review stated that you would post the next chapter by tomorrow which means July 2nd. You must be busy at the moment. I hope you are continuing this story; You left me hanging after an incredicable chapter 16.
I hope you can come back soon. I cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 15 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome series! Please continue!
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yes some giantess milf action. Great chapter. And nice to see this story again.
aaron
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Emily will only worsen it, doubt any of this will be good for Mark. Cheryl is the worst so far and I fear for poor Abby, she deserves better. Where is Lauren in all this, surely she'd have noticed her missing roomies!
Nice to see the update, been wondering when you'd update your story.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
Finally! This is the writing I am looking for. A sexy Milf who has a calm, mature demeanor, and not crazy enough to be ok with her daughters actions.
Not many stories involve a sexy milf as the giantess having fun with the man, but u did, a d thats what i am looking for.
You also put the best personalities for the giantesses. Cheryl is a horny, cruel giantess, while Emily seems gentle, but not afraid to let her sexual instincs take over. Perfect.
A great example when Emily talked about Mark being tied up. Only an experienced sexually active person would think of that and Emily perfectly fits that. It makes it seem like she has a bunch of other ideas and tricks up her sleeve.
I escpecially love Emily's attitude and how she describes all these sexy situations that Mark can end up in. Emily is now my favorite character in this story!
My dream scenario is a sexy Milf putting a little man in her panties. But Wow, Sewing him to her panties is even better!!!! Now he will be forced to stay there!
I am very excited for this next chapter, and I hope it is about the Emily/Mark relationship. It has to go on for a long time. We saw Cheryl humiliate Abby in the last few chapters, I hope Emily sexually tortures Mark just as long or even for more chapters.
I hope it never ends!
Author's Response:
TomSpeedy
I'm glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for leaving a positive review!
We willl see more of these characters, as well as a few chapters of what Abby expereinced and what she will expereince. Plenty of story and content to come soon! Expect the next chapter tomorrow!
Thanks,
NickNack
[Report This]Date: April 05 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
What a fun story. I'm loving this Cheryl chick and I hope to see a lot more from her. Lauren sounds like she could be fun too. Please continue with this story when you get a chance!