[Report This]Date: October 19 2013 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great new chapter, just wished it was longer with more detail.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Oliver! :-(
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
And, the circle starts to become full.
:-)
[Report This]Date: October 13 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice chapter, love the reg updates. I wonder what she wants, all I hope is that he does not like it.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2013 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Btw; in case I forgot to mention it? I love it that you're finally giving us the explanatory flashback! :-)
[Report This]Date: October 11 2013 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
It couldn't get worse?
Oh, Oliver, you silly boy! :-(
Date: October 10 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story has potential, it is interesting. If developed right this will be a memorable story.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, I wonder if he'll like his first aware encounter since it doesn't seem he likes the unaware.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, frig! What sport does a high school girl need boots for? Baton-twirling?*
*Some majorette lines do wear those black ones.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is this story your first. I love it, I just wis there was more detail. You should expand on Olivers experiences. This is the only thing letting the story down.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
"...just for a minute..."
LOL! Yeah, right. A shrunken man born and raised in NYC could escape from this predicament in just a minute...or less!!
Nice addition, dude. :-)
Date: October 09 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
I hope Oliver will be ok...
Date: October 09 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was a nice initial chapter although I must mention that you don't need to keep using the name Oliver all of the time. Once the reader knows it's him you don't need to mention him by name again, unless you bring in another male character. That would be in order to avoid confusion so that the reader knows who you are referring to at particular points in the story.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2013 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nicely Done T.A., I think that little Oliver is in for a wonderful time! Is this going to be a long story? I hope that Mia doesn't harm our tiny adventurer....
Can't wait for the next chapter! ;`)
[Report This]Date: October 09 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yep! As they say on LAW & ORDER (UK):
"I rest my case, Milord!"
;-D
[Report This]Date: October 09 2013 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is quite good for a first go; you seem to really understand how to utilize the size of the giantess in the narrative.
Also I'm curious are you from the UK?
Author's Response: Thanks, and yeah I'm from the UK.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2013 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Safe?! Yeah, right. Like some sorority sister/roommate of the first giantess _never_ comes looking to borrow something behind the latter's back (or take back what's been borrowed for too long).