[Report This]Date: December 13 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm Loving This Idea, Of The Loner/Nerd Loser Planning Revenge, Only To Have It Backfire, & Those Popular Winners Coming Out On Top. That Said, Have A Request For Such A Story: Please Do One About Some Weak (Emo) Kid Trying To Shrink Some (Rapper) Jock And Get His Girlfriend, But Is Shrunk Instead, With Them Torturing Him Badly, Moving On To Sexuallly-Humiliating Things. If You Could Make It Racial (Interracial Couple; Black Boy With A White Girl), That'd Be So Nice. Thanks. :-)
[Report This]Date: October 07 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tinyone234, this is a great story as usual. You've got an obvious talent for writing, and you definitely took it in a new direction by having Angelia turn into a slug. In particular, I really like how Sylvia nonchalantly squashed one of Angelia's eye-stalks at the end. That extra bit of humiliation really made this one special.
My only criticism would be this: it seems a bit of a stretch for Angelia to attack Sylvia when all of her goons are with her. No one would be that dense, would they? Maybe Angelia should come at Sylvia when she's alone, only to have her minions swoop in at the last second and save her.
Anyway, this was a really nice story. I love all of the cruel ideas you come up with, and I'm looking forward to the next one.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow hot story
[Report This]Date: October 05 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't help but feel that Angie needed to turn into a snail. :)
Date: October 05 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy cow...that's quite the scenario! The humiliation and helplessness is ramped up so much more with this kind of tranformation. That it's at the hands of a seeminly snotty rival only adds to the awesome.
Nicely written as always!
[Report This]Date: October 05 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
The whole protagonist revenge thing seems to never work in this fetish.
Kinda fits the season though.
Author's Response:
You and I just have different ideas about who the protagonist is.
Date: October 05 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Eh, I was hoping Angelia would have succeeded in her quest.
Author's Response:
In the director's cut version of this story further paragraphs go on to explain that in a series of tragic but unrelated incidents, Angelia's cat is hit by a car and killed and then her house catches on fire. She's actually fine though, lives a full life as a one-eyed slug.