It was a good story. Nice and violent with a nice twist at the end. The scenes with the tiny people did seem rushed though. Kinda glossed over. Still good though.

Really sexy story, EmmaGear! I have to say, you're clearly one of the most talented writers on this site. Your diction, grammar, etc. are fantastic, and I have nothing to add in that regard. One thing that struck me about your stories is that you oftentimes include a supplementary reason for the cruelty/torture. In this case, it's the whole "Americans are inferior to the Japanese" xenophobia: I think it adds a lot to the eroticism of the piece. I can't quite put my finger on it exactly, but something about that unjustified disdain transforms the story from good to great, whether it be undertones of racism, classism, depotism (religious or otherwise), or whatever else you happen to take a liking to. One last thing: I really liked the dimensions of the story. I felt like it went just the right amount in terms of length.

If you care to write to your audience a bit more, one thing I would suggest is including more from the tinies' perspectives. Since you're a female, you'll probably take more pleasure from writing mostly from the GTS's perspective... but I have to believe most of your readership are men, so perhaps a bit more from that angle would really make the story pop for them (ok, me haha). I don't want to be presumptive at all -- you should definitely write what you want to write -- but since I can think of literally nothing else to give you in terms of constructive criticism, I'm just selfishly bringing up what I would like to see more of.

Anyway, thanks for the amazingly sexy story. I can't wait for the next one.

I am always amazed at the stuff your mind comes up with.