[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
P.S.---you're not a downer, Shaun. Everybody knows that, sooner or later, even the half-full glass becomes completely empty!*
*See? That would've been a whole lot funnier if I had gotten it right, the first time. ;-)
Author's Response: Actually it wasn't even Shaun that said that. It was Victoria haha still funny though
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:47 AM Title: The Rise
OK! It's official: I'm hooked. Enough, so that I--almost literally--cannot wait for Volume 2.
Although, I really wish she had kept the black jacket and red bikini. ;-)
Author's Response: Great! I'm happy you're on board. I hope to make the sequel even better than its prelude. Things only get crazier from here.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Excellent! :-D
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
RIP, David. :-(
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was sweet. :-)
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well, that was an unexpected turn of events...to say the least. As for Shaun's so-called dress? Just think of it as a purple toga, dude!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
He could always have climbed down to the floor, and then shimmied up the lamp cord.*
*I don't know of any real-life night stand that _doesn't_ have a lamp on top of it.
Author's Response: I figured he didn't want to risk falling from the bed while trying to climb down.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
It sounds like Zarelda might have to become a "lady" of the evening. ;-)
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yeah, right. Like you weren't inevitably going to be discovered by Kyrie's female roommate. Even without the foot geas.*
*An actual folkloric term for a magically-induced compulsion. Usually pronounced "gaysh."
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Maybe if he mentally pictures Kyrie's feet...
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Whew! What a close call. I think I'll stop here, for the night. Keep my appetite whetted for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. And as to that pun, no, it was not intentional at all haha
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
You should have entitled this chapter:
"Shaun of the Ped."
*Ba-DUM-Boom!*
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'll bet one of those things is the town water supply. :-(
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
What? No binding and gagging him while he's unconscious and at her non-existent mercy? That's a bit disappointing. ;-)
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is the fastest slow-shrink process I've ever read of, here. Nice touch! :-)
Btw: was that an intentional pun when Zarelda said "Could you put me on the couch _when you get off_?"
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'd hate to be Shaun when he finally wakes up.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Let me guess: he's going to go to a toy store.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ungrateful little beeyotch; isn't she?
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
"My name is Zarelda. Where am I?"
Well, you're not in Hyrule, anymore. That's for sure (lol!).