Date: November 04 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like where this is heading, Zarelda has him now and I sense he will be inch to her very soon. Will Zarelda be towering over the city skyline soon?
Author's Response:
I'm still not entirely sure where I'm taking this story, but anythings possible. Thanks for the feedback
[Report This]Date: November 03 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Now as she says, "The fun begins".
[Report This]Date: November 03 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
I kind of like this story, I'd like to see where it goes. It's good you rushed the shrinking and growing process because it probably would have taken awhile.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so far. I hope she goes beyond 50 ft tall and goes full Mega in size.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Its starting to get better.
Zarelda start ling to grow, can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well theoretically if you choose to keep her as an antagonist then she may want to consider a different kind of prison. (I personally would think trapping them inside herself would probably be the most effective but that's just my idea.
Hope you can continue and see if anything interesting occures.
(Also hope I can get a little feedback on my own story)
[Report This]Date: September 26 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
I kind of hope that after she gets her initial "evilness" out of the way, that maybe she'll see how much the world has changed and maybe she'll lighten up a little. Its an interesting start. Hope to see it continue.
Date: September 26 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I do want more, do write more as it is an interesting introduction to set up the antagonist's backstory. Lets see what hijinks Zarelda gets up to in the modern world.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! It means a lot.