Date: February 25 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Zarelda and Shaun again? I was hoping we would get a city rampage by Zarelda before he shrinks her down.
Author's Response: Not even the best laid plans turn out how you expect. You'll have to wait and see.
Date: February 25 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Great update
But I have a question
"What happens with your other story"
Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure what you're asking, but I'll try answering. I am currently writing two stories, I like to put out a few chapters at a time and then switch to the other. So, I am now switching to my other current story.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
The chapter was okay, until the end. Then it got really interesting.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see this back
[Report This]Date: February 01 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Another great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot!
[Report This]Date: January 26 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is an awesome story. I cannot wait to see what happens next with Shaun and Victoria. Or if they tell Kyrie what has happened. I think I like this so much because I enjoy reading about these characters even Zarelda. Wish Victoria would ask Shaun to paint her toenails next.
aaron
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always happy to see that someone is really enjoying one of my stories. As for your wish it may just happen ;)
[Report This]Date: January 25 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Shaun is a lucky guy
Author's Response: Indeed, he is.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
It was short, as you said. Not much happened, but it's all necessary information for the next chapter. However, you came up with a very intriguing way to end it. Can't wait to see Zarelda at a club.
Author's Response: Get ready for one wild night for everyone in the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like where this is going, looking forward to more in 14.
Date: December 30 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
What irony! I just finished posting a retooled version of "1 Way to a Widow's Heart..." which is about a shrunken University scholar, trying to avoid being eaten by his beautiful teacher, ..... and then I checked out most recent to find a story by someone with the very name Shrunken Scholar. Great choice!
Author's Response: Haha that's pretty hilarious. Thank you
[Report This]Date: December 30 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
"This was a terrible idea." Or a very good idea, depending on how this turns out.
Author's Response: Any things possible right? ;P
[Report This]Date: December 22 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great to see this back.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Zarelda will definitely flip, probably start looking for him so that he doesn't foil her plans. Or she could just carry on with her plans.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good to see this story come back, and the last bit moved the story forward nicely. Trying to escape right in front of Zarelda, though, seems like really bad decision making. Escaping with Kyrie when she wasn't around was much better.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the way this is shaping up, good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
It's been a great story so far, with an interesting concept. I want to know what Zarelda does in the outside world, and I'll be very happy when you resume this story.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2013 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Liking the story so far. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
In her past and after she pushed through difficult odds. Her progress was pretty much a one sided battle. Not exactly sure how Shaun can over come this kind of problem if he's robbed of his free will. But it's still to early for anything serious to happen yet. And your villain functions as well . . . a villain. Partially un-likeable front personallity (please note I am basing this from an oppresseds perspective). A past that can show some kind of redeeming quality and has a good level if intellect.
Personally I am not a big fan of one sided battles so I am hoping there will be an adversary that creates more of a challenge for her. I've always found the best opposion to be a counter to ones perspectives of life.
Looking forward to reading the rest.
Author's Response: Shaun is the stories main protagonist, but it is obvious he's going to need help. The cavalry is on its way.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Zarelda is quite the quick learner, I'm proud of her.
Author's Response: Indeed she is, but that's not very good for Shaun.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very good, I'm enjoying my read.
Author's Response: Thank you! Always happy to hear that someone is enjoying one of my stories.