Reviews For Fleeting Love
Reviewer: riczar Signed 


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Date: October 21 2013 7:19 PM Title: Summer Lovin'
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm always happy to see someone enjoying my stories. You'll have to wait and see what happens my friend. I'll try to get the next chapter out as quickly as possible



[Report This]Date: October 21 2013 7:19 PM Title: Summer Lovin'
Glad to see you're still writing with these characters! I'll be interested to see how the goddess will mess with him, since I assume he's there to entertain her. What will the other gods do to interfere? Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm always happy to see someone enjoying my stories. You'll have to wait and see what happens my friend. I'll try to get the next chapter out as quickly as possible
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed 



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Date: September 24 2013 9:25 AM Title: Summer Lovin'




[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 9:25 AM Title: Summer Lovin'
Interesting way to begin the last leg of the trilogy! :-)
Although, your dialogue and text are starting to become jumbled together, again. :-(
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to do something different with this story. I think it will come together well. And yes, I noticed it got a little jumbled. I'll work on it in future chapters.