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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 9:28 AM Title: Athena's Plan

Well, so far/so good. She's buying the "bullied prisoner" routine. Speaking of which: that one line should of read; "...the prisoner of the Amazon who captured me." The other way round is too confusing!

At any rate, I'm eager to see how Athena's master plan unfolds. So, rest assured, I'll be here for the next chapter. :-)

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2014 2:33 PM Title: Summer Lovin'

I´m sorry but I needed write this in spanish to express myself better.

Wow. ¿Cuanto tiempo? Eh! Estaba comenzando a creer que se habia olvidado de esta historia y se quedaria sin terminar, como muchas otras, buenas, historias en este sitio, pero me alegro que este de vuelta. 

Bienvenido.



Author's Response: Muchas Gracias! No lo he olvidado esta historia. Voy a terminar esta historia hasta el final. Tu reseña me tomó un rato para traducir

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 7:40 PM Title: The New Guy

Just so long as its posted long BEFORE the first anniversary of this one!

That nitpick aside, I feel safe in saying that this chapter was well worth the wait. If only because we now have proof that Alexis really does care for Rob as more than just a foot-slave.

Author's Response:

Im going to pump the rest of this one out as quickly as possible. And whos Rob? Haha just kidding my friend

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 12:41 PM Title: Summer Lovin'

Hey!

It´s me again. I don´t know to say so I´ll just tell...

Thanks! :-)



Author's Response: Not sure what it's for, but you're welcome!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2014 5:57 PM Title: Training Days

It just seemed like forever since you posted chapter 9. Lol!

Author's Response: Ok, that's what I originally thought you meant haha XD

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2014 4:23 PM Title: Training Days

Sounds like Evandre might be needing a foot-massage, next. ;-)

P.S.---Welcome home.

Author's Response: She just might be and " Welcome home "? What do you mean?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 4:34 PM Title: First Fight

Michale Caine (as Alfred) said it best, in THE BATMAN BEGINS: "Why do we fall? So we can learn to pick ourselves up."

Of course, that's way easier said than done. Especially for people like Jon and myself! ;-)

Author's Response: Love the Batman reference. And yes, taking down a goddess isn't going to be a walk in the park.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 2:27 PM Title: Goddess of Wisdom

So do I, Athena, So do I!

Brilliant plot twist, btw. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you for all the positive reviews! It means a lot.

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 12:09 PM Title: Summer Lovin'

I hope this is a story longer that the other two



Author's Response: Sorry, but I don't think it will be. It will be longer than the first one I believe.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 11:51 AM Title: Summer Lovin'

I hope it ends well too!  A thought occured to me.  He's going to be training at approx 3 feet tall with powerful experienced warriors.  That could only help him I think.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: My thoughts exactly. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 7:49 AM Title: Summer Lovin'

Don´t worry

I´f readed all your stories as twice each

 

I´m sorry for the bad spelling

I don´t speak english, I´m mexican

 



Author's Response: It's fine. Don't worry about it haha.

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 4:18 PM Title: Summer Lovin'

Oh My God

This is amazing

I can´t hope next chapter

Please



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! The next chapter should be out in the next few days. In the meantime, may I suggest the previous stories? if you haven't read them already.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 7:19 PM Title: The Taken Pawn

A work-release program for imprisoned foot-fetishists? What will they think of, next!

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Date: December 09 2013 5:27 PM Title: Castaway

Ha! Excellent update; I didn't guess Amazons until the near-miss with the arrow. As to Phoebe holding Jon captive? I don't think she'll regard it as too much of a burden. Not if she notices the aformentioned "stiffie" (tee-hee-hee-hee-hee!).

Author's Response: Yes, Jon can be quite " upstanding " sometimes ;P

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Date: December 05 2013 10:29 AM Title: Reunion

Holy Neptune's Trident, Batman!

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Date: December 05 2013 10:24 AM Title: Southern Comfort

I don't know. Who's Alexis? Is she working for the telepathic sender of that nightmare?*


*If memory serves, Hypnos the Greek god of sleep had four sons, who each controlled a specific form of dreaming. I forget who handled the bad ones.

Author's Response: Alexis is from the first story in the trilogy.

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Date: December 05 2013 10:15 AM Title: Master Masseur

I am off to the next chapter, right now!

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Date: December 05 2013 10:12 AM Title: Ship Tour

H.P. Lovecraft: fantasy/science fiction author who pioneered the Chthulu Mythos.

Author's Response: That was my first guess, but I thought I was wrong

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2013 5:24 AM Title: Reunion

Nice little chapter.  Ominous cliffhanger.  I was thinking that as a parting gift for all that he's endured, that whoever girl he ends up with in the end should have the power to change his size.  If its a girl he likes, he'd enjoy it, and I'm sure she'd enjoy it.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to see you enjoyed this one. As for your suggestion, I just might use it.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 9:16 AM Title: Southern Comfort

Nice to see Alexis again.  I guess Aphrodite does something nice for him every so often.  Something tells me he's going to need some cuddling time with her for some dark times ahead if that dream is any indication.  Glad to see you're still writing!

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