Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't how it was so confusing to upload but at least it's up now. I'm not happy with my own proofreading efforts as there are still a few changes I'd make but I didn't want to frustrate you too much. Still, the initial document was a good attempt for someone whose first language isn't English.

Author's Response:

yeah I get it my englsish sucks I know dont worry I wont write again

I have anough