[Report This]Date: December 08 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party
I'm really glad to see this story updated! Your collaborative work on the Lost and Found series is excellent, and so far I've really enjoyed this story just as much. Really good M/f content is hard to come by, especially of this caliber. Your writing style has a great amount of erotic appeal, as well as really engaging and fun characters. I'm looking forward to the upcoming F/mf action, as well! I'm really excited for the breast play teased for the two girls, and hopefully Shelly gives Roger a chance to join them (and vice-versa, with her fantasy for him).
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think you will eally like what is coming up then!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 The Growing of Shelly
lol are we sure this isn't Shelly's birthday? haha
Author's Response:
Sorry it took me a bit to respond to you Lowboy! I kept forgetting to scroll down! Shelly believes in giving gifts that keep on giving!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 The Growing of Shelly
This story is really, really good. If you're still taking from what people would like to see, I personally would like to see some foot action. I think your writing style would make it great. If not, it's fine. The stories still amazing anyways. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Now that Shelly has three dolls I'm sure they will be all over her body, feet include! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 The Growing of Shelly
It's good to see you come back to this story. It's an example of good porn: a fun sexual fantasy with well developed characters.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 6 Shelly's Present
I've seen this side of a certain little lady before, just as-lovely as the larger side.
Well done little cutie.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 Shelly's Present
Wow this was pretty intense stuff. I'll admit I can't wait for the F/m but... this wasn't at all bad either.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 Shelly's Present
Not normally into SW myself, but thought I'd give it a shot. I liked what I saw here. Good job ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 05 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 Lori gets a gift
No! you can't stop there. :(
my birthday is in 3 days you think i can get a birthday like this one? Please....
Author's Response:
happy early birthday. i will see if the sisters are available.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party
Very well-written narrative throughout. I find myself revisiting the page just to see if you've added another chapter. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint you with this story!
[Report This]Date: October 04 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 4 Birtday Bath
I just fell in love with this story, I hope they all get to try everything with each other. Oh, I can so see them craving to eat his cum, and when he finaly shrinks he craves there's as well.
Author's Response:
this will be the widest and best birthday roger ever had. i promise a lot more action.
Date: September 29 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party
This story is so wonderfully written, excellent charature development and the story flows and is hard to stop reading. I do hope this turns out to be a long story with many wonderful chapters to read. i offer no nothing on how the story should go because what you are doing works so well
Author's Response:
i have many things planned for our hero and heroines. many more size changes and a surprise or two...i hope. thank you so much for your review.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 Small Problems
I'm loving it!
Author's Response:
thank you. i hope i can keep you loving it.
Date: September 24 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 Small Problems
Starting to get to the good stuff.
Still a bit slow, even though there, is action.
Nice rising action chapter, and cliffhanger, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
It isn't rated X for nothing! LOL I like to give a good buildup for the story. Just jumping intp the sexual bits is fun, but it won't be a story or characters you remember. I want you to be able to see what I see, feel what I feel. if you get even a little bit of that, I feel I have done my job. But thank you for your kind review!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Surprise!!!
Three tiny women and Roger what could happen next.
But it would be nice if the roles were switched. I would think Roger would enjoy his birthday small.
Author's Response:
thank you for your review. and fear not, like i put in the description, there will be a small man with a giant woman.....or women....
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 Surprise!!!
No complaints
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: September 20 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 Surprise!!!
very nice story so far, charactures are developed well and the story is progressing well. only thing wrong with it is waiting for more. :P
so far i really like this one
Author's Response:
thank you very much. i will put up new chapters as soon as i can. its a story i have been thinking about for a long time. and there are others coming as well.
Date: September 15 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party
Not a bad first chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: September 15 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party
Damn girl, I got a warm fuzzy feeling right in the begining paragraph! I love the way that you described Shelly, as she stood there and prepaired herself, checking her make-up and out fit, very sexy details... the fact that the only 'guy,' is just a step-brother, this is a releif, and) opens up a lot of different possabilitys, hmm...
The Barbie sized choice is very appealing to me as well, rather then fricken 'micro-sized' and barely able to see them, because their so small.
Great set-up, and I'm already in suspence as to what she has in store for her new little friend's...
Author's Response:
I have a lot to do in this story! Hang on as it will be a bumpy ride! I like Barbie sized as well. And it works well for this story! She has quite a bit planned for her little friends, especilly since she is one of them!
Date: September 15 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party
A very intriguing start you have here. You do a nice job of fleshing out the characters in a short space to the point that I think the no-doubt unfortunate/sexy interactions to take place later will have greater impact. Nice work!
Author's Response:
I hope the sexy interactions don't detract too much from the story. I have stories to tell and hope you enjoy me sharing them with you!
Date: September 15 2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party
i can't wait for more chapters i really want to see where you are going with this
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint!