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Date: January 18 2024 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Where did the other chapters go?

Reviewer: Rollermel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2023 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really love this story but what happend to the other chapters?

Reviewer: Rollermel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2022 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the stor please can we have more?



Author's Response: Hi! Sorry, I have no plans about continuing the story at present, since I wasn't very happy with how the original story turned out, so I do apologize!

Reviewer: Rollermel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2021 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Like this story alot 😀

Reviewer: ssetgiant Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2018 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

A very good story, hoping for a continuation.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 13 2014 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Will you be continuing this? I really like it!

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope they don't invade Earth or at least they under estimate us and we put up a fight.  Nukes and area 51 tech can be effective.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ouch, I thought collecting a semen sample would be much less painful, actually starting to sympathise with the boys over the pain they have been put through. Kevin and Mira seem to be enjoying themselves but that time might be coming to an end since they have decided to send his tormentors back.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

The size ratio is fine for me and while 250,000 miles is normally in the range of a dwarf star, your explanation is good enough for me with the exotic gas in the mantle. Taryn's theories on why we might be says you did some research..

I can't say they didn't deserve all that probing, if they had been nicer to Kevin then maybe Mira would have brought them with her. Now, I keep having this thought in the back of my head but I think they might try to collect sperm samples in order to see if the males could be brought back from extinction.

 

  Overall, good chapter and keep it up! Don't rush it too much!



Author's Response:

Their planet pretty much has to be star-sized, otherwise it'll be more like an asteroid to them on their scale. As for the research, I try and keep things more or less plausible, so that this doesn't just become a fantasy story or something like that.

I won't rush, even though I sometimes get the urge to finish quickly! I'm good at starting stories, but suck at writing them all the way to the finish.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hopefully nobody invades Earth here. Now, I love this chapter, Mira clearly has some feelings for Kevin, not necessarily romantic ones since she has a girlfriend but more of the friendship type. I hope they enjoy their time together, this could end up as some coming of age story.

 

  As for his three bullies...good luck!



Author's Response:

There won't be an invasion of Earth in this story (spoiler alert, I guess!), but there might be if I ever get around to a sequel. And yeah, I didn't want to write yet another romance story, this will be more of a friendship story.

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story, I hope you don't invade Earth or anything I like it gentle.  Hope you consider sex soon.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really neat new chapter. Mira is starting to shape up into an interesting giantess character...I can't wait to see what she'll do once she finds other humans aboard her ship!



Author's Response:

That's gonna happen next chapter (Spoiler, I guess!), so let me know what you think. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: UpDownAndAllAround Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, so glad to see another chapter of this! Is the more cruel side of the giantess fetish going to be shown on the bullies? It's my prediction I just wanna know of I'm on the right track. ^_^



Author's Response:

Hmm, I haven't planned ahead in much detail yet, actually! Mira herself won't be as friendly to the bullies as she is to Kevin, but she'll still treat them considerately. She's not gonna be the only giantess in the story, though...

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

hey man. I want to ask you one thing. I have an idea for a story but since you are so good at fantasy stories i wanted to ask you if you could do it for me or at least check out the story i already posted and tell me if its worth continuing.

Author's Response:

Of course you're welcome to make requests, and I will consider it, but I'm afraid I can't promise that I will do it, since I've got a lot of stuff on my plate at the moment (besides my own story, that is.) I'm always open to ideas and suggestions, though.

I've read your story, and, while it could definitely use some work (especially in terms of paragraphs and structure, as you're probably aware of already ;-), it does look interesting, and you should continue it if you can. A story left incomplete is always a bit disappointing - and I know I have a few incomplete stories too. Just need a lot of time and willpower to finish them!

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

It seems that space related giantess stories are greatly popular lately I wonder if this has anything to do with Titan?...your story does show promise so don't think I'm just gonna compare you to the Titan universe ok? By the way what happen to the other 3 boys?

Author's Response:

I did have this story as an idea for a long time, but yeah, it was reading some of the great Titan stories (and several other sci-fi giantess tales) recently that made me finally want to go and write it.

The three older boys are still on the ship, but Mira doesn't know about them yet. And they're not eager to reveal themselves to her, not knowing what she'll do to them.

Reviewer: UpDownAndAllAround Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

What are the bullies gonna do I wonder...



Author's Response:

Well, they have to recover from lift-off first, but I don't think they'll be having as much fun as Kevin will.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

In relation to my first review, I have to agree with you as I don't like reusing names in newer stories. I also feel a bit mean discussing science like I am but I can't help myself. This moaning, for lack of a better word, could also come back to bite me as I have a science fiction story planned. I could be taking this tad too far but I did find the explanation hard to fathom.

In relation to my second review, when I mentioned an asteroid field, I forgot to mention that at high enough velocities even an encounter with a micrometeorite and/or dust/gas could be devastating. And this noted as one of the problems (see link below) to overcome if humans are to travel between stars. Rocky bodies are much less predictable than stars. Indeed, the gravity of a spaceship may influence an asteroid if it is small enough.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interstellar_travel

In addition to that, humans are already able to predict when stars (in the visible part of the Milky Way) are about to explode (different sized stars have different life expectancies) and humans know that there are different types of star explosions. I'm assuming of course, that a spacefaring civilization has expert astronomers and detailed star charts so they'd be able to avoid star explosions. Only electromagnetic radiation (which can be stopped by strong enough magnets) travels at the speed of light. They'd easily be able to avoid radiation of the nuclear kind as it does not travel at the speed of light. I also feeling like mentioning some star explosions, for a brief period, can outshine entire galaxies.

I must also mention that humans are currently developing force fields, and, (strong) magnets would be enough to deflect most cosmic rays, in the same way that Earth's magnetic field protects the Earth from solar storms.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the info, it certainly clarifies things a bit. I'm probably not going to make any changes, though, since the reasons for Mira's unplanned visit to Earth aren't as important as the consequences of her visit. I imagined the radiation storm as being a high-energy gamma-ray type phenomenon, but I don't know if such things really exist. Then again, neither do 400-foot tall alien girls! ;)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2013 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's ncie to see you back. I like the start. My only gripe is that I see the name Mike used way too often on this site.



Author's Response:

I've never used that name before, though, I generally don't like reusing names of characters.

Reviewer: UpDownAndAllAround Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story so far! It's hard to guess where it's going for me while in another stories I can easily assume what happens, and when I do I'm right 9 times out of 10. However I can't do that with this story, which makes it more exciting! I can't wait for more and the title kinda sends chills down my back for some reason.

 

 



Author's Response:

Well, I hope it'll live up to expectations, but for now, thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is good so far...Mira seems nice enough although the fact that her race has no men might cause her to "use" her little friends in various ways. Im excited to see where this goes!



Author's Response:

That's a pretty good prediction, but you'll find out soon enough.

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