Date: November 12 2024 1:47 PM Title: Gratification
Well, Caitlin is dead in my eyes. Fuck her. Good writing!
Date: October 30 2024 3:37 PM Title: Introduction
I love how this is going!
Date: October 13 2024 2:20 AM Title: Gratification
She is definitely overdue for some poetically just karma.
Date: October 13 2024 2:17 AM Title: Emasculation
Oh, I can't wait to see her get her comeuppance.
Date: September 20 2024 10:51 AM Title: Emasculation
Stories like this make me wish I could time travel, so I can check out the finished product. It is so gripping. It incentivizes me everytime to continue my own unfinished stories, in hopes to publishing them here someday. It is just so strainous to find the right words. That seeing my story play out in my head, thinking and meticulously planning it through is so, so much easier, while my actual writing is crawling at a snails pace and leaves me exhausted.
Love how vulnurable Jack is, how he is already at the breaking point, while desperately trying to disarm the situation with reason and appeal to her 'goodness'. Still hope Caitlin turns out nice, once she showed him how easily she can break him, that he is at her total mercy.
Date: September 20 2024 10:06 AM Title: Transportation
@Carycomic yeah, you are right. In my language 'ailment' can also be used for mental illness.
Date: September 19 2024 1:10 AM Title: Emasculation
Great update! I love how emotionally intense it is.
Date: September 14 2024 4:32 PM Title: Emasculation
It's great to see an update after a lengthy break, always a satisfying read. I can only hope the next installment follows soon.
Date: April 30 2024 12:13 AM Title: Transportation
@Ichi: lol! "Ailment" usually refers to a disease. I think you meant to say "easing of his traumatization."
Date: April 07 2024 10:40 AM Title: Transportation
This story so nicely paints the cruel-gentle contrast. I really like this kind of setting - an abused, traumatized "tiny" finds comfort in the arms of a giant/ess.
The way you write Caitlin, the depth you give her, instead of just making her a superficial cruel person is awesome, even though I can imagine it pretty taxing to write. Its heavy stuff.
I'm hoping that the mc can change her views and may even find ailment for his traumatization, which she caused, in her care.
Thanks for sharing!
Date: March 30 2024 3:54 PM Title: Introduction
Hello, how you doing man? I cannot believe that this story is still on going after so many years.
I love everything about this story. From the flow it has, the characters and the time you take to create such a masterpiece!
I cannot wait for the next chapter, I hope we won't wait long for it.
Btw is this the oldest story that is still on going?
Thank you!
Date: March 24 2024 2:16 PM Title: Transportation
If this were a cliff-hanger at Writing.com, the first verbal option for the next installment would be "...trouble."
But, yeah, I think Alex' mental guess is close to the mark. Some kind of get-away residence for the Reids. Similar to one of those "modest" Hilton condos I've read about in Vegas tour propaganda.
Date: March 24 2024 4:09 AM Title: Introduction
Holy shit the goat is back
Date: March 22 2024 8:15 AM Title: Confrontation
Very nice, please write a story where only women are bigger and moms and milfs are the biggest in each families, thanks
Author's Response:
No.
You're welcome.
Date: March 22 2024 6:08 AM Title: Confrontation
Been a while since I’ve seen an update on this story. Glad it’s still going!
Wow, I miss Caitlin and her dominance in this story. Even just seeing her name gives me memories of earlier scenes from this story.
I also love it when Jack is at Caitlin’s mercy. Maybe I just miss his struggles. Interesting how this gap between updates has changed my view of this story.
Well, glad to see you are back and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
It's been hard to get myself back into the Jack vs Caitlin headspace - one of the biggest reasons why it took me so long to continue.
Thank you for the review, really pleased to be back.
Date: March 20 2024 6:15 PM Title: Confrontation
If Alex was trying to play "Jessica Fletcher," already suspecting who was inside Caitlin's locker, she did a piss-poor job of it. Dr. Watson could've seen through that over-insistence!
Date: March 19 2024 3:54 AM Title: Confrontation
Never in a million years did I think I’d wake up today to an update of one of my favorite mini giantess stories of all time. Please do continue!
Date: March 19 2024 2:38 AM Title: Confrontation
A classic getting an update? Heck yea!
Date: March 19 2024 12:21 AM Title: Confrontation
Damn...I was holding out for hope that Alex would swoop in and "save the day" from Jack's point of view, but he's looking pretty screwed right now. Wondering how long he's gonna be imprisoned this time around and whether or not Caitlin is a woman of her word on how she'll treat him. In either case, I figure that there's going to be plenty of femdom stuff going on between her and Jack; the only difference is whether it'll be mostly restrained or if it'll get pretty damn tense to the point of severe physical trauma on Jack's part. Really good sense of dramatic angst between Alex and Caitlin in this chapter, and the attention to detail regarding Jack's imprisonment is well done in this chapter.
Dunno if you'll have a follow-up chapter in the near future after this one or not, but in any case I was surprised to see this story pick up again. Nice to see that you still have the drive to see this thing through for however long you're dedicated to this story.
Date: March 18 2024 11:27 PM Title: Confrontation
Glad to see this story getting updated.
Story and writing structure are still very good. Looking forward to seeing more soon!
Author's Response:
Phew! Thanks for reviewing.