[Report This]Date: February 05 2021 9:40 PM Title: Resumption
Good god what an amazing entry. So happy to see you getting back to this epic story and keeping it alive. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
Date: September 23 2020 6:18 AM Title: Commotion
please continue this wonderful story
Date: September 05 2020 5:28 PM Title: Introduction
This story is Incredible and worth a reread!! I hope Jack finds a way to live happily once this story is over! Please come back and finish when you can!!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 8:36 AM Title: Introduction
Came in expecting to mess with my dick, but the story messed with my heart.
Seriously speaking though, I feel for so many characters in this story and am really looking forward to seeing how things'll turn out.
The writing is superb and the characters have so much depth to them, I can't help but want to know more about and understand them, even the antagonistic ones. Who knows, maybe at some point my wish that they all be friends will come true... yeah, let me dream a little.
I dearly hope you update this story, it's great.
By the way, is there any way to get notified if a new chapter comes out? I can't wait
Date: July 27 2020 10:55 AM Title: Introduction
Please come back to this =(
Favourite story on the site by far.
Date: July 27 2020 10:55 AM Title: Introduction
Please come back to this =(
Favourite story on the site by far.
Date: May 21 2020 8:35 PM Title: Introduction
Damn please update, read through all this on one sittiing don't leave it on this cliffhanger.
Date: January 31 2020 1:18 PM Title: Introduction
this is great cant wait for the next chapter
Date: January 09 2020 5:58 PM Title: Commotion
Oh my GOD you can't stop there! I need to know what happens next!! Please keep going I love this story and I love Caitlin-heavy chapters!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2019 9:42 PM Title: Introduction
It's always such a treat when this story is updated. Looking forward to seeing more - you really left us on a cliffhanger!
Date: December 04 2019 6:16 PM Title: Commotion
Love this story, thanks for coming back to it!
[Report This]Date: November 24 2019 10:20 PM Title: Commotion
How much you want to bet she keeps him bound and gagged inside her teddy bear from now on?
Date: November 23 2019 1:11 AM Title: Commotion
I'm worried for Jack but if he goes missing again it should be obvious who's responsible. Most of his friends should know.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2019 11:20 PM Title: Commotion
Finally, the Beast of the Apocalypse has cornered her prey ! Will she now reveal that she is madly in love with our hero, only to be stopped by super-sized Penny, leading to her injecting herself with more growth serum, starting the Kaiju Wars ?
Or perhaps she'll just torment Jack. Which is just as good !
As always, a pleasure to read you. Also, it was awesome to see Caitlin unwittingly helping Jack and showing us why ecen other Alphas fear her.
Date: November 16 2019 10:19 PM Title: Introduction
Kudos to you for fleshing out Alex when you could actually have avoided doing this for the grunts of the bully.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2019 9:17 PM Title: Conversation
That could be Caitlin's theme song.
"She ain't heavy. She's a bother!"
Welcome back, dude. :-)
[Report This]Date: November 16 2019 2:57 PM Title: Conversation
I wonder if, towards the end, things are going to get so heavy for Jack, that he ends up facing down Caitlin with this "nothing to lose" attitude. The kind of attitude that lets a hero face down an army by himself, not because he's brave, or stupid enough to think he can win, but because he has nothing left, and figures its better to go out on his own terms like a man. Jack strikes me as the kind of guy who would do that.
Date: November 16 2019 2:03 AM Title: Conversation
Glad this isn't dead
Date: September 03 2019 7:52 PM Title: Collection
I love the emotions in the scenes, you bring out Jack's despair and I think, depression. Same for Penny. I really feel for them, especially Penny. I fear the next chapter I read it'll be that she has some terminal disease. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 5:50 PM Title: Disorientation
Another plausibly emotional interlude. Bravo!