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Date: September 13 2013 7:52 AM Title: Consolation
You really should separate the character dialogue from the narrative text, a whole lot more! I say that as someone who was initially--and quite frequently--guilty of it, himself. Aside from that, this is a masterfully poignant story. :-)
Author's Response:
Done.
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Date: September 13 2013 7:48 AM Title: Humiliation
Please, don't tell me she's had a secret crush on him all these years! I know opposites are supposed to attract. But, to get her object of desire, this way? Even for a gts-story, that's a little _too_ conventional.
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Date: September 13 2013 7:43 AM Title: Introduction
Uh-oh! Looks like this trio has a new shopping mascot, after all.
Date: September 12 2013 10:37 PM Title: Consolation
Good start I would say, carry on. Characters are well written so far. Hope to see further development between Penny and Jack.
Date: September 12 2013 9:50 PM Title: Consolation
Really like this story and the length of it is perfect.
Thing between Jack and Penny are getting more interesting.
Date: September 12 2013 9:23 PM Title: Introduction
This story is pretty great so far. I've read other stories like this but unfortunatly they never seem to get finished. PLEASE DON"T FOLLOW THAT TREND! I have high hopes....Also would you be interested if other authors wrote stories in your universe? Maybe.
Author's Response:
I'm currently writing Chapter 6 and I've planned out for at least another 3-4 beyond that, so assuming I don't change it around drastically or drop it there will be more to come - it might take a while, as I'm quite a slow, anally-retentive person and I don't have a great deal of spare time! I can't promise there will be a 'finale' either, but I have plenty of ideas to keep it moving and potentially tie it up at the end.
In terms of other authors writing about this universe, I'd prefer that if they did they set is somewhere completely different and didn't involve any of the locations or characters I'm using - just so I have freedom to go in any direction and not worry about other people adding their restrictions to it. Another issue would be if anyone tried to expand on things like GH-X2, the way society functioned towards Betas, etc - which I'm planning to go into further detail on later - so if you'd like to write about a world with normal and double-size humans then go for it but please do your own take on it! Furthermore, it's not a completely new or unique premise; as I've mentioned in the story notes, I've merely taken a brilliant concept from a story called 'Classic Guys' and tweaked it to fit what I wanted - all credit to SpawnGTS for the highly realistic and compelling original.
Thanks for the kind words, Imagin8