Date: October 27 2013 1:43 AM Title: Introduction
You have hit my fantasy right on. From the size disparity, to the muscle size, the personality, the "torture" and everything. Particularly the little episode with Caitlin stuffing Jack into her gym-bag is something I've always thought about and now you did it perfectly.
Please, please, please continue this story. I absolutely love it.
Date: October 04 2013 10:03 PM Title: Abduction
Things aren't looking good for Jack. My gut says he's gonna endure at least one day worth of torture if not two before hatchig some spur of the moment plan of escape. While I don't want him to suffer an INSANE amount of humiliation and physical brutality, it would help justify his views on Alpha women at large (at least to some extent). Also wondering how things will develop between Jack and Penny whenever they meet up again.
Hope to read more soon!
Author's Response:
I like the phrase 'Alpha women at large'! Pun intended?
Date: October 03 2013 1:06 PM Title: Abduction
great story so far
[Report This]Date: September 28 2013 8:15 PM Title: Abduction
This is one of my favorite new world order stories I've read! I love the idea you had with the growth hormone... makes for a great plot :). I look forward to finding out what happens to Jack at the hands of Caitlin. Her domination of him has been very satisfying so far. Keep up the good work! ;D
Date: September 27 2013 12:12 AM Title: Introduction
Question: Do Beta guys sit in front of the class? I mean, if they ever sat in the back, they could hardly see the blackboard or anything else, their vision being blocked by the bodies of the big alphas in front of them, right? Or are they pushed to the back of the class, where they cannot see over the bodies of the towering alphas, because no one cares about them anyway? :)
Author's Response:
There are so few Beta kids per class (three at most, but usually none) that their desks are to the side of the room where they can easily be tucked away between classes by the Alpha teachers. There is no set pattern or protocol for them any longer (now that they are such a minority), and their sightlines are not guaranteed, though some teachers make more of an effort than others. In case you were wondering, there are no Beta teachers because they're unable to maintain discipline over students so much bigger - a lot of the Alpha teachers would rather the Betas went to specialist schools as split-scale tutoring is complicated, so they do tend to resent and look down on them as much as the Alpha kids themselves, setting a precedent.
Date: September 25 2013 6:20 PM Title: Abduction
Excellent! Can't wait for chapter 6 and many more...
Date: September 25 2013 10:38 AM Title: Abduction
Is it weird I'm really into this whole girl-bully boy-victim thing? Loving the way this story is going! You're really good at writing chapters that are just short enough to be thilling, and just long enough to be satisfying!
Date: September 25 2013 6:05 AM Title: Introduction
Your poser images or poser video are not bad quality-wise and I don't think most of your readers/fans are very picky regarding this as your poserwork is brillant.Anyways I respect your decision.
Date: September 24 2013 10:27 PM Title: Introduction
way more stores need giantess at this size.
Date: September 24 2013 2:05 PM Title: Abduction
The opening couple of paragraphs were really great although I found it strange that nobody saw them in the corridor, especially since a teacher was there seconds earlier. It still felt it was a good chapter though, as I liked like the description. This chapter was quite inspiring actually, and comment about the corridor is only a minor issue and think she did what she did precisely because there was nobody there to stop her.
Author's Response:
It's between classes so there's not really anybody around... but I never said nobody saw it happen... ;)
Date: September 24 2013 1:04 PM Title: Introduction
Great Story!Besides, I'd like to know if you will illustrate as I know you're a great poser maker.
Author's Response:
I've been using my 3D modelling skillz to help flesh out the story - to get comparative sizes and things as accurate as possible - but I won't be able to make the renders looks as good as I can imagine it when writing, so I probably won't try to. I may release a couple of test images to show the basic 'look' of the characters, but I'd rather that people let their own preferences shape how they envisage it.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 9:13 AM Title: Abduction
The UK has a saying: "In for a penny; in for a pound." Well, right now, I'll bet Jack is wishing Penny was there to pound Caitlin!
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I doubt even Penny would have much luck against Caitlin in a straight fight. Also - I'm a Brit, so yeah I've heard the saying! This story is written in a pretty mid-atlantic way though, it's got elements of both cultures and terminologies fused together in it.
Date: September 24 2013 7:53 AM Title: Introduction
Sounds like Jack is in trouble! I hope she doesnt hurt him too much or maybe Penny saves him , the latter is unlikely though.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 6:41 AM Title: Introduction
I think Penny is going to be his only hope really for any relations with a woman. Based on the way the author set the story up, its government mandated that all girls receive the hormone. Even with some probably slipping through the cracks, he and any other Beta guy will be hard pressed to find a Beta girl close to home. They will have to settle for a life of lonliness, garnering the attention of a sympathetic Alpha girl, or leave the country to find a woman in an underdeveloped country.
This is a good story so far. As you can assume from the last paragraph, I'd like to see things work out for Jack somehow. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 6:40 AM Title: Abduction
Maybe she still have some 'humanity' and empathy in her, for a moment she seemed like a normal girl, although it didn't last very long for the little beta. Heh
Is Caitlin's body only very toned or more like bodybuilder type?
Author's Response:
She is an athlete, so her body has shapely, well-defined legs and arms and a very flat, firm stomach. Though she is incredibly over-sized (imagine a 5' 9" girl over doubling in size due to experimental growth hormone) she doesn't have the same sort of physique as a more squat, explosive bodybuilder, but her muscles are almost large enough to put her in that bracket. Think more like a superheroine in a comic, powerful muscles but still eminently feminine.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2013 7:09 AM Title: Compunction
Oi vay! Out of the fire; back into the frying pan.
Date: September 23 2013 6:24 AM Title: Introduction
Well 6' 3.5" is actually tall for a woman, to the extent that it could be said to be freakish and as such I wonder if Penny got a proportionate boost because of the drug, more than expected anyway. As for your story keep it up as I am hooked on it and wish to see it end. And to be a little shameless about this but please read mine as well. The one called The Escape as I intend to finish it.
Date: September 23 2013 5:35 AM Title: Compunction
Really cool story, I found it on Amazonlove and came here to finish reading. Hope you have some more growth in store for Penny :D
Date: September 23 2013 4:00 AM Title: Compunction
If Alphas are twice as tall as humans, then Penny would be tall even for a Beta , 12' 7" halved is about 6' 3.5" , she is an Amazon! I hope that Jack patches things up with Penny if he is why she did not come to school but I think it could also be her body's bad reaction to the GH-X2 and possibly making her grow even larger.
Author's Response:
Penny is very tall and quite slim, but not to a freakish extent - she is a little bit gangly and awkward with her height, like a lot of tall girls can be. Caitlin, though, is truly amazonic; at 'regular'-size she'd still be almost 6' 7" and very muscular - so very intimidating for Alphas and Betas alike. She's also far more physically-minded than Penny, so despite being taller she has greater control in her movements and is less ungainly.
Date: September 23 2013 2:31 AM Title: Compunction
I wonder...actually I don't know. It'll be interesting to see where you take the story.