Date: August 12 2015 11:05 AM Title: Inundation
great story. glad to see that you're updating more frequently
Date: August 12 2015 10:47 AM Title: Inundation
Is there hope left for our protagonist after all? :D
Date: August 12 2015 10:23 AM Title: Inundation
Oh now one of them has a heart! Well, Caitlin will probably take it out on him.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 10:36 AM Title: Realisation
By this point, he might be better off making himself go down the proverbial three times. :-(
Date: August 11 2015 8:50 AM Title: Introduction
Great chapter poor Jack! Is alex the girl who crushed Jack's pen ? I hope you'll update soon again.
Author's Response:
Yes she is - she also carried him to the bathroom the first time he encountered Caitlin.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 1:07 AM Title: Realisation
I swear I'm not a fan of torture porn. Honest...
Still, I do want to see what happens next. I do like Jack as a protagonist, and I want to see him get out safely and alive. But it won't be easy, and a hard struggle to get to safety is probably the most compelling type of story to read. Even when it involves a giantess.
Pants to be darkened.
Date: August 10 2015 11:46 PM Title: Introduction
And our hero's cover is blown, much humiliation to follow!
Date: August 10 2015 11:06 PM Title: Realisation
Looks like there's gonna be a swimsuit chapter coming up next. Curious as to how each of the girls will act around their newly acquired boy-toy. I got a decent impression on how Caitlin and Amber treat him, so it'll be interesting to see how the other two act around him. Kind of hoping for some sense of karmic justice to take place after all this torment, but still the suspense and inhumanity is enjoyable all the same. Looking forward to more with anticipation.
Author's Response:
It's gonna be a swimsuit frenzy.
Date: August 10 2015 10:58 PM Title: Introduction
I disagree with gadgetmawombo however.
Calling the police would simply worsen Jack. For one, Caitlin is rich, with a well connected father. The police would see the claim as being an attempt to blackmail her, or be a result of a kid with no friends trying to get attention. Plus Alex, Hannah, Caitlin, her rich family, and Amber would all refute Jack. Compared to Jack who has no one. Delon even thought it might be a sick joke, and he was one of Jack's only friends.
Things similar this happen in the real world, but with normal sized people, there is a reason you never hear about it.
Author's Response:
This is the sort of thing I'm going for.
In theory, calling the police could easily sort this problem out in a very deus ex machina sorta way - they'd come round to check, find a Beta boy being humiliated by at least one Alpha girl, get him safe and charges might be made if Jack wants to (he might not just so as not to take on the Reids and risk a legal battle). This means that a lot of people get involved, which leaves the story very little breathing room and makes it very complicated to continue without everyone being aware of what's going on - his parents will keep him at home and everyone will know what's happened to him, it'll become all about the aftermath of the event and not about pushing the story on.
In practice, as pointed out in the review, justice is rarely simple even when it should be, and I've chosen to take a more guarded view on the situation to reflect the kind of loaded deck stacked against Jack even if he is 100% honest about what's happened. I've tried to paint the picture that this sort of thing has happened before, and the Reids have managed to evade prosecution and even set up the precedent of people blackmailing them. The police therefore have reason to be cautious in steaming over to the Reid household and gaining entry, and who's to say that they've not been warned or incentivised not to follow through with this kind of claim by a higher authority who has had his wallet filled by Caitlin's father to keep this stuff at bay?
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 5:53 PM Title: Realisation
Wow!
I thought Amber was going to be a playful one.
Instead she is just as scary as Caitlin or even worse!
At this rate, they are going to drown him. Or at least give him a taste of water boarding.
Not sure how long he will last. Caitlin has already broken him down, and now Amber is going to take him home after this? It's all going downhill for Jack.
With the new girls, I wonder if they can be any worse than Amber. I guess we will see soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: August 10 2015 5:47 PM Title: Realisation
Definitely agree with @gadgetmawombo!
These bitches need something to throw them down a couple of pegs.
Definitely loved the new chapter, and try to update soon!
Date: August 10 2015 5:12 PM Title: Realisation
Great chapter! I still don't know why these girls feel the need to torment the poor guy like this? Are their lives bad, it certainly doesn't seem that way. To me it looks more like a bunch of spoiled rich kids thinking they can do whatever they please with a poor kid and suffer no consequences.
I reaaaaallly hope that isn't the case and that these girls at least get a stern punishment of some kind. They can't keep him forever I would think and I really don't think they are crazy enough to kill Jack to keep his mouth shut after all this. Plus, Jack already told someone about all this, I really think he should have just called the police, at least they would have broken him out of the house!
Author's Response:
The girls are doing this to Jack because they can - he's half their size, an eighth their weight and strength - it's funny to them and they don't truly put themselves in his position as they've never had to think like that.
It definitely aligns more with the spoilt rich kids motif than anything else, it's not that they are always directly trying to torture him, more that they don't care if their insensitive actions seem like torture - being thrown through the air without warning and landing in the water is actually quite a scary and disorientating moment for Jack, but from their perspective they just tossed a little guy into a pool playfully and he swam up just fine.
Amber and Jack both have mean streaks and seem to enjoy his displeasure for whatever reasons, Hannah is quite ditzy and would appear to not really know or care that he might be upset, and Alex is an unknown quantity at the moment as she's been shown to be complicit in his humiliation before but isn't quite so keen at the moment.
Date: July 23 2015 6:38 PM Title: Complication
These bitches are crazy, and the parent's have some kind of sway over things! Basically, it doesn't seem like Jack is safe even if he managed to get away, what's stopping her from kidnapping him again?
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 4:20 PM Title: Complication
Jack made a great point. If he fell asleep, when he wakes up, he might make sounds or he could snore during his sleep. It may be quiet, but when you are that close to Caitlin, a single movement is risky. He made the right choice.
This story has a lot of reviews. Especially a lot per chapter. I blame your writing; its just too good. This story is like a giantess thriller that even my own heart is pounding! I guess thats what makes it unique.
You would think that with Caitlin's power, she wouldnt mind just kidnapping another little guy. I really wonder what is her interest of Jack. Does she like him? Is she obsesed with him? Did Jack do something and she wants revenge? I dont think theres any connection. I think she just wants someone to control and someone that no one will care about. She even said that "he is the weediest kid in school". She wanted a nobody, someone that no one will miss. However, some people do miss him.
Penny and Delon miss Jack and now want him back. The question is how, especially in a deathtrap such as Caitlin's house.
Not only is Caitlin's house a trap, but she got a 'friend' who is gonna find Jack and guard her room.
I have a feeling that Amber will find Jack. Caitlin would never check her own teddy bear, but when you look at the teddy with a new set of eyes, one may find a good hiding spot and I think that is exaclty what Amber is going to do.
Another reason why I think that Amber will find Jack is becuase she is good at finding things, especially when Cailtin keeps calling her to help her. We can see this when Amber says "so, what have you lost, again" implying that Amber has helped Cailtin find other things before. She is specialized in finding things, and Jack is no different. He is a thing in their eyes, and even Jack knows it.
I dont know how Jack will escpae this one, but my bet is that he has to secretly make a deal with Amber to hide him, and then Amber has to fake the rest of her search as she hides Jack. Otherwise, I think he is screwed.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 1:12 PM Title: Complication
Unlike Edexdexx, I never SAW any of those movies. But, I do know that he won't be able to FOREVER evade AMBER.
;-D
Date: July 23 2015 11:26 AM Title: Complication
And the suspense builds. I'm glad that you're continuing this story. Really interested to see if Caitlin has some kind of secret love-hate relationship with Jack (which maybe is why she kidnapped him?). Also wondering how Penny fits into the coming chapters. Tingling with anticipation whatever the result. Keep posting it's getting juicy!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 10:06 AM Title: Introduction
Feels like Jack is in one of Saw horor movie traps, a wrong move ending in death or maiming. Sleep deprivation, two giantesses, gotta be getting hungry, nature calling. Next chapter/s going to be rough. Can't wait.
Date: July 23 2015 9:14 AM Title: Complication
Are you ever gonna make the story esrn its gentle tag, or are you just gonna keep stringing me on :p?
Great stuff as always. Looking forward to more (and renders!)
Author's Response:
Haha! Inevitably the story arc will continue along its current path for a while, but gentle content has been planned out and will take place. I cannot promise when, either in the context of the story or in terms of when I'll get round to it - but there will be more eventually.
Date: July 23 2015 8:25 AM Title: Introduction
Penny replied! They will need some Alpha help if he wants to live, Penny will be key although not in a fight, Caitlin is way too strong for Penny.
Date: June 27 2015 4:00 AM Title: Dissipation
Love the story, hope you continue!