Date: May 16 2016 7:01 AM Title: Introduction
Great chapter again! Well, Jack become a totally toy, slave. The fact that he dissociated himself emotionally from what is happening is maybe a defense mechanicism. Penny will return but I don't bet on justice system. However, I bet on bad karma style justice like Cayce's Summer Job.
PS: you are a great writer as beginner!
Author's Response:
I think his weariness is reaching the point that he's not himself any more, he hasn't got the energy or the mental faculty to fend her off or plan as he did when she first got a hold of him. It's now an endless sequence of one-sided experiences that he has to withstand. She does appear be trying to keep him weak, hungry and on edge because she's aware of how crafty he can be, but perhaps that's just the author speculating...!
Cayce's 'Homunculus' is my all time favourite GTS read, and it wasn't even because I found it erotic (feet and being inches tall is not my preference at all) - it was because the story was incredible, and twisted and toyed with my emotions so much I could Not. Stop. Reading. I will deffo have to make time to read Summer Job, I may have tried to read it before but not got into it as much, or something. 'Homunculus' especially convinced me that I should try and write a 'proper' story, something that gave the characters motivations and made the experiences that much more meaningful than just 'giant sexpot touches your dick'. I like to think GH-X2 is my paltry attempt at repurposing that kind of approach to meet my own interests in macrophilia.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2016 7:12 PM Title: Capitulation
You know that feeling when no matter what do, it won't change the outcome? Well, Jack is in this moment. No matter what he tries to do to escape, he will always be caught and punished. Now he just gives up in this chapter.
Jack had many things before he got captured. He had friends, family, and an identity. Well Caitlin took everything from him, including his identity. Jack kept fight until he lost something special to him. His virginity. Yeah, I know some people don't consider that to be losing virginity, but for Jack, he wanted his first sexual experience to be with another Beta girl, not like this, and Cailtin took that away from him too.
Hmm. I never considered jump rope as a bondage tool until now. I mean, this is an everyday item that most people have and it could be used for some humiliation like this.
When Jack mentioned that his hands were resting above his head, I thought Caitlin was going to tie him up to the bedposts and go for round 2. Perhaps another time.
Alpha food must look like a buffet for Jack. Just one plate may fill him up and he will never have to get seconds. However, Jack does get a meal, on Caitlin's thigh. Then he gets seconds on her foot. Might be worth it considering how desperate Jack is.
Jack said multiple times that he did not want to give her satisfaction of his humiliation. It looks like there is still something that Jack actually has control of. He still has hope. The question is for how long especially with Cailtin being so unpredictable these last few chapters.
The couch scene was nice. Caitlin comforts Jack and it actually doesn't comfort him. Instead, it seems to scare him because it doesn't know what to think of her anymore. Should he feel mad, thankful, he doesn't know. She keeps doing opposite things to him which confuses the crap out of Jack.
I think Caitlin is just breaking him down until Jack just gives up. Then she cheers him up until he gets some energy. Then, she humiliates him again when he starts showing signs of vigor. It's a cycle. She probably enjoys breaking him down again and again and Jack hates it so much.
If I was Jack I would start acting like crap all the time so Caitlin would comfort me all the time. Of course, she might catch on my idea so I would resist here and there, but for the most part, I think Jack can exploit this by faking his misery. Now I wonder if Jack can hear my idea.
As this story goes on, it feels like a social experiment. "Hey, let's put him in the pool". "Hey, let's throw him". "Let's try forcing him to orgasm". "Now let's force him to eat off her foot". "Now let's mess with him and have her comfort him". Well, if this were an experiment, I would say it is going well if the point was to break Jack down.
I wonder what Caitlin has in store for Jack next. I'm loving the bondage stuff (rope, tape, gags, cuffs). Would love to see more of it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
There's a lack of consistency in Caitlin's approach that could be explained by a few things. I'm definitely trying to hint at the fact she's just doing what she feels like, and if it happens to be mean, or nice, or sexy, it's not like she's really thinking about it as much as he might think she is - she might just be a bit naive and doesn't really understand how to be very cruel particularly well. It's not in doubt that she has some kind of fascination with him, whether she straight-up likes him, or just likes how small he is, or what it is he represents to her. She's very much a bully, and most of her friends are just yes-men, so maybe she doesn't know how to be normal with him at all, and is just trying to do what she thinks he would react best to, or expects, as an inferior manlet. It's not beyond the realms of possibility that someone has trained her to treat him like this either.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2016 6:50 PM Title: Capitulation
Seriously, the more I read these the more I wonder, what's the point of all this? Just for fun? Has she done this to many small males in the past? Remind me why she gets to get away with all this, exactly? Does this world not have the same laws as ours? In our world just because someone is rich or has connections doesn't mean they get away with everything. This is clearly assault, rape, and kidnapping, how does someone get away with all that? Is she gonna kill him? Or keep him forever? If she lets him go, how does she know she'll be safe? Ugh, so many questions! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
All of the above are valid questions. In answer to has she done this to many small males in the past? - we know of one definite example from Delon's message to Jack a few chapters back, but there's a fair bit of hearsay and rumour. As you well know, this is my only story (in anything, ever), and I don't consider myself to be a great, or natural, writer, but I've gone to great lengths to try and create a believable world, characters, situations and actions because this is something I really, really like to imagine. I've zero first hand experience of this sort of stuff in real life, plus I am majorly aware of how horrible, brutal and unacceptable this scenario would be in real life, but for me this a seriously intriguing scenario that pushes a lot of buttons, both in terms of the sexual dominance displayed, and the acute injustice felt by Jack (persecution makes for incredible drama, though I'd never wish it on anyone).
I know where this is going to go for the time being, I've probably planned out another 10-15 chapters until I reach my current CRITICAL JUNCTURE IN THE PLOT where I haven't made my mind up how to 100% progress the story yet (I have a few options on the table, though). For the time being, Jack's current predicament is basically a waking hell, with the sexiest devil ever - it is tearing his brain apart. It's a huge mind fuck that I myself would be terrified of, AND insanely aroused by.
Will he escape? At some point, the story will take him away from this torture. Will he see Penny again? I can vouch for it. Will there be justice? It depends what you think fitting justice would be for Caitlin's crimes - she's still almost a charicature at the moment, but greater depth has been hinted at in some of the less monstrous moments.
There's still a long way to go with this yet...
Date: May 15 2016 6:30 PM Title: Capitulation
Hot damn! Two chapters in one week? And without a dip in quality?! I must have made someone in heaven very happy to be so blessed!
I don't have much more to add that I didn't already say in the last chapter.
However, that last line;
> “Good boy,” she soothed, “Let it out. Let it all out.”
That was probably the hottest line in this chapter TBH, possibly in the entire story so far.
I've always felt like sexiness isn't just about events or contrived situations, but about emotions; The fact she's obviously playing a game of "mean-nice/mean-nice" is what makes the humiliation humiliating.
Author's Response:
Indeed! It's been a bit of a stretch to get it all written down, but I've tried to strike whilst the iron is hot and it's all fresh in my brain. Chapter 16 has been by some distance the longest chapter I've nad to write so far, primarily because there's no convenient break point until that line. It means you get a load of GH-X2 all in one go, though, so not a terrible ordeal for the reader...
[Report This]Date: May 15 2016 6:15 PM Title: Capitulation
I am starting to believe that those weren't crocodile tears. :o She certainly have some issues. Maybe she likes/loves this little beta! In her own way, probably. Not a healthy one. And don't want him away from her.
Author's Response:
There's definitely something going on. She's not being as cruel as she could be.
Date: May 15 2016 4:19 AM Title: Culmination
Seriously, how is Jack going to get himself out of this? And this isn't really a rhetorical question.
Date: May 13 2016 4:12 PM Title: Culmination
God Damn. It's like you've reached into my mind, plucked my favourite fantasy, and made it even better!
The way Jack reacts to Caitlin, especially him "finding truth in her words", makes me think this is the start of her breaking him.
If so, I'm excited to find out how Caitlin will continue to crush his spirit, as well as how that subjegation will be presented (as an unconsenting fear of punishment, or an active yearning to be ruled?).
Author's Response:
Haha, you're very welcome! It's very much personal-fantasy-come-true stuff for me, in more shallow terms with both Caitlin's apearance and the size ratios, but also with the humiliation / kinky stuff and the existential 'it would probably suck to be that small' dilemmas as well. Jack definitely seems close to breaking point, it very much depends if he can stay strong mentally, or if he capitulates. It's that crucial.
Date: May 12 2016 8:51 PM Title: Culmination
Great chapter! I wonder how Jack is gonna cope with all this when it's over, some people can end up killing themselves from trauma like this. He's been forcibly raped, hurt, and humiliated and the worse part is that he's probably not gonna get any justice for it. It's hard not to feel sorry for him.
Author's Response:
Certainly this is going to mess with his psychological state. He was already in a bad place about his future prospects, so this will compound that enormously. He has shown a lot of resiliance up until now, but it's beginning to reach breaking point.
Date: May 12 2016 7:51 AM Title: Introduction
Awesome to see an update, each chapter detailing Caitlin's humiliation of Jack but also reducing the chances of him ever being rescued.
Author's Response:
You can definitely see the toll it's beginning to take on him; even when she's not being that rough, it's just too much for him to handle. She did say she would let him go on Sunday... but can she be trusted?
Date: May 12 2016 6:38 AM Title: Culmination
Awesome. I'm really glad you're still working on this story
Author's Response:
I'll probably be working on it forever, if not, longer! The trail might go cold for a while, but I will try to get chapters out when I have time - there's a lot more to write.
Date: May 12 2016 5:26 AM Title: Introduction
Good Chapter! I starting to doubt about any rescue for Jack.
Are you going to post another one quickly or not?
Author's Response:
I am going to try and work on one swiftly, but if I'm not happy with it, I will not put it out, unfortunately. I have to be stringent, as there were a couple of chapters I rushed out earlier, and I'm not 100% happy with them because of it.
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 8:43 PM Title: Culmination
Hooray! A new chapter, at last. And a highly...climactic one, at that.
Author's Response:
Cimactic is the word... !
Date: May 11 2016 7:36 PM Title: Culmination
Great writing, as always. Any chance we will see penny again? I've been checking back every time you release an update in the hopes of the gentle stuff with her. Either way, kudos on an excellent job
Author's Response:
Not to give too much away, but Penny is very much a key part of this story. I'm sorry it's taking so long to get there, but believe me, it will.
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 2:39 PM Title: Culmination
Another fantastic chapter! I love how sexually involved Caitlin is these last few chapters.
In the beginning, it was just physical and mental abuse, but now it's also physical and mental abuse, but this time it is about Jack's sex life in a nutshell.
Caitlin is exploiting his inexperience of sex by showing him how it's done. She does it so fast that she calls it an easy task making it more humiliating for Jack.
Jack wanted his first time with a girl his size so he could remember it as something special. However, Caitlin took that away from him and made him come by force.
Last chapter was oral sex, now it's a handjob. You would think that with these simple positions that the chapters won't be so long but Imagin8 describes these positions beautifully and uses teasing to make the final event much more meaningful.
I understood the positioning this chapter much more clearly when she is holding his legs down with her thighs and using one hand to hold his wrists. I can picture that and how she still has a free hand to tickle him.
This sexual abuse doesn't seem as bad as the physical beating that he endured in the beginning of this story. It's just my opinion, but I find this stuff highly erotic. Loving how she dominates him on her bed.
Her breasts must be bigger than his head. And he woke up facing them! Amazing! So she was awake the whole time and just held Jack there becuase she wanted to. Also, she held him there in that position so when he wakes up, his movement will notify her.
Caitlin obviously has sexual experience do to her knowledge of what to touch, what to say, and how to tease. I bet she can make Alpha's come very fast as well.
With her giant hand, I'm picturing a girl putting her hand in a baseball glove and wrapping her hand around a dick. The glove would dwarf his member and she would have a good grip on it.
I found it funny when she said "Ew". And it's not like she didn't expect that to happen. I bet she just didn't expect Jack to come that fast and when she finally noticed something sticky on her hand, she got surprised. It's like if someone spills milk on you and you freak out not knowing what it is, then someone tells you to relax and they say it's just milk.
Lots of heavy vocabulary. It's a good thing, don't get me wrong. I like learning new words here and there.
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Hey TomSpeedy, once again you've gone to great lengths to analyse the chapter, which is very cool! It is definitely meant to be erotic, this is 100% a sexual fantasy of mine, and the humiliation and injustice is definitely a key component in what makes this type of scenario very compelling to me (though I doubt I would want to experience this kind of subjugation in real life, even if there was such a giantess). It's these conflicting feelings of arousal and fear that really need to be maintained throughout the chapters with Caitlin, fuck me - she's incredibly hot, but fuck me - she's a nasty piece of work. Her character is clearly sexually experienced, a result of how attractive, popular and aggressive she is, but she's become bored of how no-one is a match for her physically, and Jack is like the opposite end of the spectrum entirely.
I'm not sure I like the baseball glove analogy, I don't think being jerked off by a big, awkward, coarse glove is especially sexy! It's a giant human hand, with feminine fingernails, that's as powerful as a hydraulic press but just as capable of sensual, delicate movements as a normal hand. The scaling up of normal body parts is something I find fascinating, and vice versa - Jack's dick would be about 2 inches long and laughably puny compared to her. If you wrap your own hand around your pinky, that's basically what we're talking about here.
The “Ewww” bit is Caitlin being a bit prissy, and also trying to belittle him further. She wanted him to come quickly, on her terms, and why miss out on an opportunity to make him feel bad about it too!
About the big words - I'm quite a wordy person, and I am chronically guilty of using a long word over a short word if it is more specific, even when most people would rather use a simpler word to make comprehension easier. That's my opinion - I'd rather be more specific, and describe more accurately what's happening, than use simple language. I've definitely learnt more words in the course of writing this, which is actually a really good exercise for me, and has made my diction generally a bit more articulate!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 2:10 PM Title: Introduction
I really couldn't careless how long the wait is inbetween chapters for such a high quality story. There really isn't any wasted motions or words and every chapter feels like an important event or another building block to Jack's mental collapse.
Caitlin has been a really compelling enigmatic villian whose motives are so hard to pin down. The level to which she takes in tormenting and torturing him goes beyond the point of doing it for the sake of it. Which maybe I would've been inclined to think so earlier, before the moment in chapter 10 where Caitlin thinks Jack may have escaped, that there's some personal reason she chose him. Excellent story, and easily my favorite ongoing story right now.
Author's Response:
Thank you, it's very kind of you to say such nice things! This story takes such a long time to write in no small part due to the amount of revisions I do to it when I revisit over and over again. I don't have a lot of time to spend on it, and so it just takes forever to get round to finishing chapters to a level I'm happy with. This chapter was especially tricky as it had to be paced perfectly, and make sense within the context of the story - Caitlin is not 'rewarding' him with this sexual experience, she is using it against him. Even though, as the author, I find this whole scenario very erotic and, to a certain extent, wish fulfillment, for Jack it's part of a pattern of dominant, overwhelming behaviour that he can't cope with, and it has to feel like that too. He's not flat-out enjoying what should be the most exciting experience of his life, instead it's tinged with humiliation.
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 1:28 PM Title: Culmination
Wow! I wonder if she really wants to train him, to break his mind, and worship her. To be her personal pet, that nobody can find.
Author's Response:
It seems that way, doesn't it!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 12:57 PM Title: Introduction
I'm starting to suspect that while the toying with a beta boy isn't exactly uncommon, the extent Caitlin and her friends goes to with this is extreme in this society. Particularly the rape and kidnapping.
Im also getting a very strong vibe that Caitlin had some serious emotional trauma as a child... I don't recall if we've seen any comments on a father figure for her but I suspect something terrible happened with a man when she was younger and probably in her pre-apha state.
I long for happy endings so I'd hope something works out.. Kinda reminds me of some old story long ago when some guy's step sister inherited her Dad's fortune and that included a shrinking device. She tormented him and used him as a toy with her friends only to eventually realize her hatred for him stemmed from years of childhood abuse from the deceased father.
Author's Response:
Yeah, you're basically right. Whilst almost all Betas are most assuredly considered second-class citizens in the parallel society I depict (apart from a handful of celebrity Betas), Alphas on the whole don't really go out of their way to do anything outlandishly cruel to them as they barely affect their daily lives at all. There were high-profile incidents in the past between Alpha males and Beta females, which led to a policy of giving growth hormone to all girls where possible, but Beta men are just sort of expected to exist to do specific jobs their small size gives them an advantage at (like in the tech manufacturing industry, for eg). Caitlyn and her friends are doing things that are technically illegal (kidnap/rape/abuse/coercion), but realistically a minority of particularly unforgiving Alphas would claim that the Beta boy is 'lucky' or 'resilient' enough to cope with the law of the jungle stuff...
Date: February 03 2016 10:53 PM Title: Degradation
This story has been quite compelling, I never know where it will lead to next! I am on the edge of my seat and highly anticipating the next chapter(s).
~Johnny
Date: December 31 2015 8:25 PM Title: Degradation
"Her hand pushed against his waist and tummy, sliding him back across the silky fabric, positioning his body so that his back pressed against one hefty tit and his butt was resting against her hard stomach."
This part confused me at first becuase when I thought of the push, I thought she was pushing him away. Now, I realize that she is actually pulling him toward her by putting her hand on his midsection and bringing him toward her. Now I get it. The word "push" threw me off.
Also, it looks like a spooning position in this scene. If I'm correct, Jack's back is to Caitlin's front. If these two were letters in the alphabet, Caitlin is the capital C while Jack is the lowercase c and the big C is surrounding the little c.
It makes sense now.
Author's Response:
I can see why the word 'push' could be misinterpreted, I have amended the sentence to
"Her hand grabbed him by the waist and reeled him in, sliding his body across the silky fabric towards her, positioning his body so that his back pressed against one hefty tit, his butt resting against her hard stomach."
And yes, the Cc spooning thing is spot on!
Date: December 31 2015 8:41 AM Title: Degradation
another great chaper. i'm glad that this hasn't been abandoned.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't get round to this story often, but there's plenty more to come.