[Report This]Date: September 07 2013 12:54 PM Title: two girls or two mountains?
I really liked the tissue death
Author's Response:
thanks man. i like deaths that are caused by normal, everyday bodily functions. it shows just how small and insignificant the woman was if she died by something a little girl blew from her nose. =)
Date: September 07 2013 6:18 AM Title: two girls or two mountains?
New sentences ALWAYS begin with a capital letter and i could swear none of your written sentences does. Seems just like you intended it like that. But be aware of the fact that the rules to post stories here contain correct grammar, at least to a certain degree. I guess beginning a senctes with a capital, is basic grammar.
Author's Response:
well, the reason why i don't include capital letters is because it would take to long. i write rather fast and it would be too much of a hassle to quickly press "shift" before each sentence to create a capital letter. i do do other forms of grammar like commas and apostrophies. the reason why correct grammar is preferred on this site is because it would make it easier to read. capital letters don't play a big part in make things easier to read and the website even says that the people who enforce correct grammar aren't "gramma nazi's". i do hope you will be able to look over this flaw of mine and enjoy the work =)
Date: September 06 2013 9:52 PM Title: strange phenomenon
Awesome start. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
thankyou. it might be take a little longer than usual for me to pump out ach chapter because i have another story which needs writing and school that needs working. but don't worry, another chapter should be up soon! =)