Date: September 10 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Things are kins of falling into place it would seem.
Date: September 10 2013 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ah-oh, Julia's getting a little bit wet down there.....such a naughty GIRL! Watch out Dan, your gigantic ex wants a little, she's getting frisky... ;`)
So very realistic and expertly written. The suspense is off the chart's, I love this!
Date: September 08 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is moving up my 2013 favorite's list
Date: September 08 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hmm, Dr. Leslie's examination room, sounds like trouble Dan, get out of there QUICK!
The hussle and bussle of the trek through the inner-city, without actually seeing any of it from within the confines of Julia's purse, would be like a roller-coaster ride in complete darkness.... Frickin terrifying, and then- Hel-LO Doctor! oh crap... not the prostate exam! heh! ;`)
*The suspence continues to build....
Another great chapter!
Date: September 08 2013 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Hope that the examination isn't too stressful on Dan. Can't wait till he's at Julia's apartment.
aaron
Date: September 08 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
"Well, that is...different."
Understatement of the New Millenium, Doc (lol!).
Date: September 08 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh No, things are going to happen now.....but, what? The suspence is killing me!
I really like the way that you slowly revealed Kat's 'mystery' guest. Comparing her denim clad legs, to the more mature, nylon encased legs of his familuar....
Time for a 'purse-ride'...
Date: September 07 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is a very enjoyable read. Looking forward to more.
Date: September 07 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Curious to see where this is going
Date: September 07 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
I bet now he's glad he always had a good rapport with his ex. I can't wait to see how she handles his condition. Even though I wanted this to happen, it seems like a very realistic thing to happen because Kat most likely doesn't want or shouldn't have to look after him. He's ex most likely does. Hope that there will be more foot/toe scenes. At any rate great story and I will be tuning in to see what happens next.
aaron
PS wonder how Kat convinced ex to come by? did she somehow do this for Dan's benefit, at least to her? Can't wait till next installment.
Date: September 07 2013 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Looks like Kat had more than one way to skin Tiny Dan (lol!).
Date: September 06 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Your style reminds me of 'Thomthumb's'. The excruciatingly slow, but well developed scenes 'play-out' so effortlessly.... Easy to visualize, and each additional event that takes place not only adds to the erotically charged enviroment- It seems to multiply in intensity at the same time!
Dan better start behaving more appropriately around his red-haired princess, she is doing her best to protect him from the outside world...
I think that he'll soon realize that the best way to handle a red-headed giantess is to "Kiss her Ass,...and learn to 'like IT! ;`)
Date: September 05 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
That was an excellent chapter. It was written perfectly. These characters are also very well written. I can't wait to see more.
aaron
Date: September 05 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
excellent story, I really enjoy how realistic your characters are coming off. The writing is top notch. I meant to comment sooner but your pounding out chapters a torrid pace. Everytime i woudl finish one, you'd have another one for me to read.
I cant wait to see how you play all this out. The characters of steph and kat are great.
Date: September 05 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Excellent so far
Date: September 05 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
So endeth the first day. Let's hope his second one is comparatively better (but, I doubt it).
Date: September 05 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG! Sweat yoga and tofu cakes! I think he's gonna need a little prozac as well, maybe just to sustain him for a little while longer....he is 36. Is that old? Ah well, he couldn't be in better hands, I mean hey, what if he were to fall into the hands of his 'ex-wife', or maybe someone like 'Tinyone234', god knows he'd be praying for some of those kale salads and bean sprouts...... ;`)
Damn this is so well developed, I love your discription's and the 'realistic-ness' of this tale,...Just one suggestion, could you start titling the chapters, I know you could come up with some great ones...
It would make it easier to remember where you left off, and add just a bit of a hint as to what is to come...
I'd give this 20 stars if I could!
Date: September 05 2013 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Look at it this way, Dan. It might be better than the dehydrated military-surplus stuff you might be forced to eat in a top-secret government lab.
Date: September 05 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story. The details are superb. Also love the casual way in which Kat and Steph had a discussion about Dan,to him and for him but didn't really listen to him. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also love the somewhat playful nature of these two girls and the fact that Kat thought he was 40 instead of 36 was great cause that brought yet another bit of realism to this story. Well done.
aaron
Date: September 04 2013 10:05 PM Title: Prologue
The long-awaited content-having chapter! Oh gosh, burg, I've been waiting for this for like a week and I know it's only going to get even better from here.