[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Floor exercises and springboard practice, I bet. I mean, she is a gymnast, right?
;-)
Author's Response:
All good guesses my friend. You'll have to wait and see. Also I imagined Anna as a girl from Brazil.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well, at least he's with non-vindictive keepers, for once.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, if she isn't going to show him off to her friends (and it's now obvious I would've lost that bet!), then I will guess she's taking him to the high school science teacher...who's most likely female!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
How much you want to bet she brings back some trustworthy friends? Trustworthy to keep her "little" secret, that is?
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have to wonder if Anna might be a blonde East European exchange student?
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Strike 1, Jon.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2013 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
This does not bode well, at all.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Refreshingly Platonic! If I could, I'd give you a six-star rating, just for that. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I've never been much for the really raunchy or violent stuff. I've always like the more gentle side to a point.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
aw yeah. I hope theres still at least 3 more chaps of ms L.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
You still tend not to separate the dialogue from the narrative text. But, at least you're double-spacing the paragraphs.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
btw how come aphrodite always dresses him in a toga? I know shes greek but it still seems kinda silly.
Author's Response: I see it as she dislikes modern clothing. She prefers the style from her time.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
aw yeah looks like she will be around for a while.
Author's Response: Yes sir
[Report This]Date: August 26 2013 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
love this. I really hope miss appears for a loooong time.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think you're talking about Ms. L right? Well I make no promises about this story, but she'll be around for a bit ;P
Date: August 26 2013 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
I was waiting for a little more before I made a comment. Another good start. A little disapointed that he didn't end up with Alexis, but then I guess there wouldn't have been a sequel. I would have bargained a little more with Aphrodite. Maybe secure a good romantic future for myself or some other reward. Can't say I'm much of a fan of unaware. I hope there will be some interaction in upcoming chapters. And who knows, maybe one girl who WON'T forget when its all over.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, there will be some interaction soon. I really liked the relationship of Jon and Alexis, but I wanted to show that Jon has no control over his situation. What Aphrodite wants goes. He doesn't get a say. However, I can assure you Alexis will come back later on. It might be awhile, but she will make a return. Jon hasn't forgotten about her yet.