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Reviewer: schwuppy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 9:40 AM Title: Part 1: Downsizing

Good

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2013 11:13 PM Title: Part 1: Downsizing

Hm i dont know what to say others than, i am confused by all those paragraphs. They may be an important part of the story concept in general but for me they are simply a trigger to stop reading, sorry.

 

I was really surprised by this after all those increadible stories you have posted here, like "changes happen", "tutoring" or Soroity Prank" which puts you on a very high spot in the meaning of writing skill here on this website.



Author's Response:

It's written in comic format

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2013 8:25 AM Title: Part 1: Downsizing

Great, great, great!

While I was reading I thought one could ask for a custom video rather than a comic, but methinks six giant women is probably too much.

Oh... the printable version says this story is not complete btw!



Author's Response:

Thanks you very much sir!

 

And the reason it says the story is not yet complete is because it isn't. It's a two part story. The other part is already written though. I'll proofread it and upload it sometime next week.

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