Reviews For A Revenge Overdue
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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4: Ambitions

I just saw this and if it's not to late I'd like to see more.

aaron

Reviewer: SuicidalCyborg Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 4: Ambitions

Please do more it sounds great!

Reviewer: beefy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: I Quit

I would like to see Pete put in his boss' lunch, or another unaware coworkers lunch, but that's because Im a vore. theres no reason to kill pete though, i just think it would be a nice scenario. your other story in progress is also amazing.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I may return to this story at some point, but my main focus is on Pearl for the time being. 

Please feel free to leave a review on there too!

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: I Quit

A good piece of writing so far.  I'm a bit confused over some of the reasons you wrote about why she did this to him.  How could his confidence in talking to women make the other office workers disrespectful of Mandy?  If she was so unhappy with him, why didn't she tell him?  I assume that he got evaluated every so often, or just fire him?  I'm looking for a more solid reason why she would go this far.  A more solid reason could be that's she's attracted to him and he rebuffed her advances, but was flirting with other female co-workers.  I'm just not a fan of the old "I shrunk him, because I felt like it."  But otherwise the story has grabbed my attention and I'm interested to see what her plans are for him.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 4: Ambitions

Revenge??? Sounds more like age-related jealousy!

Now, normally, I give chapter-by-chapter reviews. But, the first three chapters were so riveting, I couldn't wait to get to this one's cliff-hanger! Eng. translation: I will definitely be here for ch. 5!!

Reviewer: calvinsans Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: I Quit

I really like it so far. The descriptions during the mouth scene were my favorite so far. Please keep going

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Is there anything you'd like to see done to Pete?

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