Date: September 24 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Discipline
Love the thought of being her songbird! Great writing!
[Report This]Date: March 05 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - It is MY Birthday!
Love it. Bitches being taught a lesson is always brilliant and you wrote it very well. I added you on YIM!
Date: January 03 2014 12:14 PM Title: Epilougue
Very good job in sustaining the central plot twist. The "hypocrisy" of Nancy's "murder" was nicely lampshaded by Holly's developing conscience. Perhaps I'm too attached to darker characters, but I tend to agree that Holly needs a more cathartic retribution against Susan. As Susan herself demonstrates, a high degree of empathy is itself no obstacle to cruelty, and can even amplify it.
I'm not usually one to make suggestions to authors, but I'd love to see Susan try her therapy on some entitled fratboys who think women owe them sex.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2013 11:07 PM Title: Epilougue
God what a great story, would of loved to hear she likes to go back every now and then.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 11:26 AM Title: Epilougue
This was a spectacular story. I just found it and read it. This is a wonderful story, I loved the message it represented as well as how well it was written. Great job. I'm only sorry I didn't read it sooner. Also I loved the details that you went into when Holly was filing Susan's nails and rubbing lotion on her feet. Again great job, I can't wait to see your next story.
aaron
Date: September 19 2013 9:24 PM Title: Epilougue
There is a whole industry of "we can fix your troubled teenager" clinics that would gladly use shrinking technology if it existed, and charge parents an arm and a leg while breaking arms and legs. Great story!
Date: September 19 2013 4:38 AM Title: Epilougue
Did you plan out how this was going to end or did you just pull it out of your ass?
[Report This]Date: September 18 2013 9:12 PM Title: Epilougue
So, I was right! Figured it had to be a set up, threw me a little when she broke Holly's hand, little extreme but I guess so is shrinking a person! I almost never go for happy endings for the shrinkee but in this case, pretty fitting, how cruel would that have been to eat her after she was a changed person.
Good work.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2013 6:48 PM Title: Epilougue
Loved the story! I'm impressed at how passive Holly turned out to be, however. I would have done more than slap/punch Susan like she did. Truth be told, I would probably go buy a gun and kill her later on.
Date: September 18 2013 2:00 PM Title: Epilougue
So what does Holly call her technical stepdad now?
Date: September 18 2013 1:59 PM Title: Epilougue
Holy shit, I did not see that coming!
I actually don't know how I feel about this.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - It is MY Birthday!
I think you fooled a lot of us. I had guessed that it was a form of "therapy" from the first couple of chapters, but you cleverly diverted our attention and got us guessing as to Susan's motives. A well written story. Hope you write more good stories in the future.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2013 1:54 AM Title: Epilougue
I love Titan and The Shrink Show seems all but dead but this has pretty muxh leapfrogged to my favorite tale this year.
Beautiful ending.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2013 1:11 AM Title: Epilougue
WHOA WHOA WHOA.............
Sizescribe + Happy Ending!?
Date: September 18 2013 12:23 AM Title: Epilougue
A little abrupt but alright in the end.
Date: September 17 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 - On One Hand
Hmmm, ok, that kind of threw a wrench in my assumptions but I loved it! I don't know what some reviewers are talking about though, except for this chapter, the things Susan has been putting Holly through has been pretty tame.
Not sure what is going to happen now but can't wait to see!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 15 - On One Hand
Susan and Holly have become one of the best pairings in the history of this fetish or at-least imho.
Definitely waiting for the next few chapters.
Date: September 16 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 15 - On One Hand
She's going to die of hypothermia.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Pivotal Hypocrisy
This a really great story, very well written and laid out. I think I have figured it out now though, I wasn't sure at first if this was the workings of her mother but now I am. I don't believe Nancy was killed, Holly didn't actually see it and the "blood" could have easily been something else, Nancy was a plant to further transform Holly from and uncaring brat to a compasionate caring person. The only thing now is I'm not sure if Susan will want to give up her pet or not when the lesson is over.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2013 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Pivotal Hypocrisy
Part of me feels there was more to Nancy then meets the eye.