[Report This]Date: September 11 2013 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man.
Classic Tinyone234.
I always go through an emotional rollercoaster when reading your stories. At times I wanted the little ones to live. Other times, I was happy to see them crushed. I even thought they would be let go--or maybe live a little bit longer. STOMP! Nope. Dead. Amazing action and unique images. Not going to lie, but I read the story here first and then checked out the renders. I pictured everything just like the renders. Very well done storytelling. I could only aspire to write like you. Thanks for another awesome story!
Date: August 13 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well i think in a sequel Jenny should shrink and all of a sudden end her life for the camera :) I wonder if she would beg for her life..she wouldnt really have a right for doing so.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Jesus H. Christ you're depraved.
But I'd be lieing if I said this wasn't your best in my opinon since Crucified. Not a knock on your other work but the dialog gave me that same creepy/gut wrenching feeling as the aforementioned story.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
@zephilia - Good luck getting a sequel from Tinyone234, hehe.
Nevertheless quality story as always from her, epsecially since we have the art to go with this too.
Author's Response:
Hey, I write sequels!
I just don't write endings
[Report This]Date: August 12 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, I call for a sequel only they use other parts to kill them in the video.