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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 11:58 AM Title: Within Terrors Grasp II

It sounds like some kind of corporate palace coup is in the works.

Author's Response:

Definitely some interesting things are bound to happen, I am sure! Thanks for the reviews as always!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 11:55 AM Title: Within Terrors Grasp

Hoo-boy! Rest in peace, Elysse.*


*Poetry not intended.

Author's Response:

*Snicker* Poor Elysse. She was only just ever trying to be nice. D:

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 11:53 AM Title: Regret

And, what if these two prove unable to crush said hope? Hmmmm? I'll bet they're not even considering that possibility.

Btw: glad to see you back on-line. These last two chapters (read straight through) were well worth the wait.

Author's Response:

*Snickers* I hope that turns out to be the case. Can you imagine a tiny people revolt?

Thank you! I'm hoping to update more very soon as well! 

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 4:25 PM Title: Within Terrors Grasp II

All caught up on this! I really hope Elysse is going to be ok. She obviously has a good heart, and doesn't deserve death.

Also, I've now learned that when attempting to stab and shrink a giant woman, only shout a battle cry AFTER stabbing said giant woman. Filing that away for later. Never know when I might need it.

I liked Chanel a lot more before discovering that she's well aware of how sadistic Britney can be. And Seung, well she's quite evil herself.

I'm more attracted to Gentle stories with minimal foot content(not my thing), but I'll keep reading and reviewing to show my support!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! :D
And agreed! She's a really nice girl, isn't she?

LOL, yes! Truth! But here's hoping you never will. o_o''

I'm sorry to have disappointed you on that! In her defense she has little choice other than to tolerate it, though I wouldn't want to say whether or not she was accepting or even encouraging of it to any great degree. Indeed, Seung is probably the worst so far. But I find her quite entertaining.

Fair enough, my friend! I appreciate the support!

Thanks a lot for the review! 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 12:23 PM Title: Within Terrors Grasp II

Brittney is wonderfully detestable, and it'll be good to see her shrunk. She will not be pleased.



Author's Response:

Agreed. >.> She really is a terrible person, no?

I'd love to see her reaction if that was how it turned out. Which I couldn't say conclusively, wouldn't want to give any spoilers. ;)

Thanks for the review! :D 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2014 9:07 PM Title: Within Terrors Grasp II

I love Seung.

 

That said this is one of those stories where you enjoy the bigs but kind of cheer for the littles.



Author's Response:

Likewise, she's my favorite character thus far.

Excellent! That's exactly what I'm going for, so its nice to hear that marks being hit.

Thanks for the review as always! 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2014 11:29 AM Title: Within Terrors Grasp II

So Seung using Nathan as a bargaining chip, to get what she wants. Then later use Elysse as a chip to Nathan.

Thanks for the quick update.

Author's Response:

Precisely. She's certainly one to watch out for. >.>'

Well, thank -you- for the quick review!

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2014 4:21 AM Title: Within Terrors Grasp

nice story so far



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate that.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2014 10:45 PM Title: Within Terrors Grasp

Doesn't seem like Elysse has a chance. Since Nate, Nathan, or Natey failed.

Author's Response:

:C I suppose we'll see!

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2014 5:12 PM Title: Within Terrors Grasp

Great stuff and definitely curious to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! The second part of this chapter will be up in a little bit. :3

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2014 11:00 PM Title: Regret

Good stuff.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 14 2014 5:31 PM Title: Regret

Good thing for Nathan Chanel likes him so much, and good thing for Nathan they didn't throw the needle out.



Author's Response:

Agreed, on both of those in fact!
Its likely that neither of them realized it was spiked with anything. Why would they have reason to after all? How could one expect a tiny like Nathan to be resourceful enough to poison his own weapons or have had help with doing so.

Thanks again for your review!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2014 1:07 PM Title: Regret

Maybe he can escape again. Be like the movie "The chronicles of Riddick." And just have a skill for escape.

Anyways really enjoying this story and the frequent updates.

Author's Response:

Hey! That's an excellent suggestion actually. That would be really handy; I'm sure if he doesn't have a skill for escape already he'll certainly develop one as time goes on.

And I'm glad you're liking it! There should be another update by Wednesday or Thursday I'm thinking.

Thanks a lot for the review! They mean a lot. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 10:39 PM Title: - The Impossible

Great to see this back!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy! And thanks as always for the review. :D

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 6:49 PM Title: - The Impossible

@Xandar: You're right there. I have that reaction whenever a character does something illogical, but I need to stop, because often the logical approach is not what someone would realistically do.



Author's Response:

Very fair. Though there are certainly some individuals that could keep a cool head in those kinds of situations, I'm of the opinion that most would react adversely in many of the scenarios that a tiny might find themselves forced or thrust into.

But I suppose we'll see where it takes him next chapter! Hopefully somewhere good. o_o' 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 11:38 AM Title: - The Impossible

Welcome back! It's good to see both Trouble stories get updated again. That's a lovely bit of decision making, blowing his surprise by shouting. Let's see what adventures it leads to.



Author's Response:

Why thank you, kind sir! Its good to be back, and very much agreed!

Quite, but people do tend to make terrible decisions when running on an emotional high, no?

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 7:32 PM Title: Attempting -

I hope you get a chance to write again soon. You've set up what looks like an intriguing conspiracy, and I want to learn more about these people.



Author's Response:

Heyo! Thanks so much, I'm glad you're a fan!
And also terribly sorry that its been so long since I've been able to continue the story. Unfortunately a whole bunch of things came up that rendered me incapable of adequate time to write. But, I'm really hoping to pick this up again soon since I had a lot of fun writing it. ^^

In fact I'd say its pretty likely you'll start seeing updates again!

Thanks again for your review!

 

- Xandar. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 6:27 PM Title: Attempting -

I shall be here waiting to read.



Author's Response:

Just wanted to say that I won't be able to post for a couple days. D: My apologies in advance!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 5:32 PM Title: Attempting -

That's (mentally) telling her, Nate!

Thanks for continuing to post the new additions so promptly. They're really helping to increase my emotional involvement with the story.

Author's Response:

Haha.

Of course! I've been trying to post regularly, but, unfortunately I'll be stuck until Sunday. Got some important life obligations atm involving helping somebody move. My apologies in advance! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 1:50 AM Title: Decisions

I'm torn here.

 

1. The evil Asian domme type giantess is epic and two bratty blonde cuties ain't bad either.

 

2. However I'm kind of rooting for the little guy and gal here.

 

Good stuff.



Author's Response:

Much appreciated, Adam!

Even as the writer, I can relate to being torn. >_> I like them all quite a bit. But can't help but root for Nathan / Elysse myself.

Seung is so far my favorite addition to this universe, though.  

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