[Report This]Date: August 23 2013 9:08 AM Title: part 1
I absoluetly love the stly of this story...if the violent rampage turns out just half as good as this introduction, this might become one of the best giantess stories in my opinion. Hope the update won't take too long. :)
[Report This]Date: August 05 2013 5:54 PM Title: part 1
It's very well written in a style that let's me know a lot of care and thought went into it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for those kind words.
You were very helpful in my research. I haven't forgotten about that. And I haven't forgotten about you... Captain McKay of the RAF will appear in this story.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2013 12:51 PM Title: part 1
Well it’s good so far as far as the dialogue is concerned, the back and forth between the different news stations. It captures the feel of the hectic rush during a breaking news report. If the entire story is going to be through the perspective of the various news stations, then I guess it would be experimental but since this is a violent GTS story (as far as the tags are concerned) I’m not going to expect anything ground breaking.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback.
A giantess going on a rampage is always groundbreaking. *drumroll* :D
Well, guess you have to hold on to see where I go with this. ;)