[Report This]Date: July 03 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet Milly
Plan on coming back to this story eventually? I find it to be most enjoyable.
Author's Response:
It's not dead just neglected. Blame this stories bratty attention seeking kid sister "Tales of the New World." Don't fear Tales is close to over then Trials and Snapped get the attention they deserve. They might even be better!
Date: March 05 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet Milly
Great dialogue
[Report This]Date: January 12 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 5: Cold Conversation
Glad to see this back with an interesting twist even.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 4: Nightmares Never End
Great story, I just hope Tara changes and help Milly. I feel sorry for her, and I hope that wither she gets revenge or goes insane again. Please continue the story.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Nightmares Never End
Excellent good sir!
[Report This]Date: August 25 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Bad News Bitch
I love this one so far so glad to see it live on.
Author's Response:
And it will continue to live on. Just probably at a slower pace than Trials which might make it that much better..maybe.
Date: August 08 2013 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bubble Baths and Bruises
I love where this story is going. I do hope you incorporate the little slave girl suffering at the feet of her mistresses.
Author's Response:
Feet is a definite possibility but I like this story more for a chance at interesting character dynamics but don't worry the standard stuff will be in here in some fashion.
Date: August 08 2013 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet Milly
This is gloriously dark. I enjoyed your full commitment in the character interactions to make this one sexily glum affair. I hope you continue to find ways to keep the tone as such, as it's very interesting. I especially like how Milly is so broken that her owner has to resort to measures beyond threats of death to convince her to work; it's a damn unsettling contrast. Nice work here.
Author's Response:
Is it possible to be starstruck by a semi-anonymous internet comment. Probably not but I'm whatever the equivalent would be. I appreciate your comment and I will try hard to continue to keep this tone. The next chapter might be a little lighter with Michelle returning...or maybe not Michelle is kind of a bitch.
[Report This]Date: August 08 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bubble Baths and Bruises
I'm enjoying this the more I read.
Looking forward to more.
Date: August 07 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meet Milly
Shame you wont be updating this, i would have been interested in following it.
Author's Response:
What's this a new chapter as soon as you post what are the odds of that?
[Report This]Date: August 03 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meet Milly
Alright, I'm hooked.
Author's Response:
All the better for when I dissapoint you with irregular updates. Sorry. :(
Date: August 03 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meet Milly
The rivalries among the girls make this an especially intriguing premise. Yes, a shrunken girl with spunk! Why can't they get rid of her? Why did they choose her? Is their relationship hate-hate or love-hate? So many questions...
Author's Response:
There relationship is very complex. There is a past with these girls I will be diving into.