[Report This]Date: June 07 2018 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Having finally had a chance to read this story, I can definitely see why it was given a medal by the websites administrators. For a child, there are few things that could unravel the fabric of their world like having their parents break up. Especially if they had lived happy lives up until that point. It opens up a raging storm of emotions and anger that can rarely be quelled, and usually is just swept under the carpet. To see someone so very corrupted by their anger was terrifying to say the least. And it made me feel so very bad for the main character. But at the same time, it was Tawnee's ruthless conviction that made for such a strong impact.
And the twist at the end. That has got to be one of the most delightfully cruel way of breaking a person's spirit I've ever seen. It's ingenious really! Much as the story itself. I would absolutely love to see a continuation of this sometime.
Date: December 09 2016 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is incredibly well written, and it suits my tastes so much that i'm still amazed that i've never noticed in more than 3 years. truly an awesome story
[Report This]Date: September 06 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: March 02 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Tawnee is the real beeyotch of this story. And, she is definitely non-sexy scarier than even Slimerjimer's Cortney!
Date: October 28 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story! Great sense of ownership
Date: January 03 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I so hate Tawnee for hurting that poor girl Rachel, I wish they switch bodies so Tawnee gets what she really deserves.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing!
Do go on if you have not already.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a good story! Parental myrmidon was the first story I read on this website, and I was a little down when I saw that my favourite author had stopped adding chapters. I'm glad that you're back, and I really hope you finish parental myrmidon! Once again great story!