Date: March 16 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 4: Doppelganger?
I thought that was a great chapter. Personally, I would like a few more chapters before its over. I see so many ways it could go.
Dave
[Report This]Date: February 18 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 3: Time Spent with a Friend
I've been enjoying this story very much. This chapter was great. But I have always had a butt fetish. So of course I would love this chapter...lol
But seriously your story is very good. You are doing a great job.
Dave
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: Time Spent with a Friend
"My entire life was dictated by her, and she was totally unaware of it". -that single sentence had the most impact, or the most effect on me, anyway...
If you could have elaborated on that particular point; diving deeper into that realization and really driving that point home. This wasn't even his new owner, (it was her room mate) and the idea of this, (as she contemplated 'kidnapping' him(unknowingly)) could have been carried out with a lot more detail...
Being in this extremely submissive position, even a little girl could steal him away and there would nothing that he could do about it!
I think the erotica within this type of tale, pretty much relies on that aspect. The complete helplessness and the 'unknown' that could happen to him...
Great discriptions while he was held captive inside her tight jeans! ;`)
Date: February 10 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Dream
wonderful story i have ever seen, go on,i can't bear it.:)
Date: February 09 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Dream
Loved it! Excited to see where it goes.
Date: February 09 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Dream
The fact that he has now become this 'inadament object' is a conundrum in itself. The idea of becoming so small, in fact is quite the tantilizer indeed...
Knowing that it's just a dream, also takes away from it. Although, you are experimenting with this, right?
The bathroom shower scene was great! But, she still doesn't see him as a person, which, for me... is another take away.
Maybe if she actually, kissed the necklace, or squeezed it so tightly, that he popped out of it, and was permenently stuck at this tiny size. She discovers him, and captures him up between her fingers and....
I don't know? Ha! Just asuggestion...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think you'll find his dreams becoming more and more vivid, to the point of almost seeming real... Unfortunately, there can be no tiny man. The story is of him becoming the necklace. However, I welcome your suggestions; I may be able to work something out.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Dream
Very nicely writen, the discription of his dream-like perspective as he eventually realizes that he's dangling from her giantess neck was told quite artistically....
Great start, please continue soon I look forword to more of this magical tale. ;`)