Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2013 6:58 PM Title: Omnomnom

Oh Man!  Kimmie's Mom never even saw him?  You really had me going there, who's Idea was that? (Kim's or Ur's) Wow, I was expecting him to drop into her clevage and become trapped within her huge breasts....

Oh well, back into the old sock yet again,   Kimmie like foot toy, she really, Really, likes foot toy's  ;`)

I guess I could 'rate' this time, but I notice that you amost 'always' forget to cap. the 'I', when your referring to yourself in first person....  It's nothing really, but when I keep seeing that over and over it doe's kind-of bug me,ya know?

'I' like this, keep it up!

Author's Response: It was a idea between me and kim but mostly her idea thanks for the awesome rate and i will keep an eye out for the Is and ofcorse she likes foot toys shes a giantess ;)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2013 6:41 PM Title: Escaping

Much better Jj,  man you sure like the sweaty tootsies though,  Huh?  Now, after escaping from the sticky-stench of the giantess shoe, you can finally get a fresh breath of well needed air!  :=)

Giving Kimberly some credit as well, I wonder if she would actually torture you like this if she could?  The 'breaking-down' of his mental state wouldn't take long to do, with her methods of punishment....

Maybe now, Jj could actually escape and go in search of help, and 'maybe' become discovered by Kimberly's sexy mother..... ;`)

Nice work, an I look forward to reading more....

Note: There are a-lot of' 'other' female body areas, other then the feet, just a suggestion..  ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for another nice comment and well kimberley does her best ;) and i have yet to disscuss the next chapter with giantess kimberely but she is pretty fond of the foot area. I was thinking about including some vore or pussy? But yet again if giantess kimberely is uncomfortable with some parts its up to her she is saying all of these ideas :)

Reviewer: Bianca Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 4:10 PM Title: Kims awakening

hi jj. interesting start, though like wildcatman  said, proofread and space. i understand the dyslexia, and this is for fun, but make it fun for us.    you have a good start, but slow down. again, like wildcatman said, dont just tell us the air in the show was stale, show us. how did being in the shoe affect all five of his senses? sounds are muffled, a bad taste in his mouth, blinding light when her foot is removed. and how does kim feel about it? you said she was sadistic, which she somewhat seems to be, but why? finally, give us emotion. make us feel what jj feels, cramped in the dark, dank shoe. let us know what kim feels as she holds a full grown person in her hand like a plastic army man. she seems like this has happened before and isnt surprised. instead of any kind of acquaintence, he was in her sock and getting stroked. you have an interesting story that can be  made great. just slow down, descibe and make us feel. i really hope to see more.      ps, i wouldnt introduce new characters until we know the first two. im not even sure what jj or kim look like. remember, just because you can see the characters doesnt mean we can. hugs

Author's Response: Thank you appreciate the advice and im currently typing all my stories on my iphone and giantess kimberely doing her best to edit too :)