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Date: September 09 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

Remember Tim Conway's New Scooby Doo Movie?



Author's Response: Of course. I even remember when that show was a weekly Saturday morning cartoon! :-O

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Date: September 09 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

And that's the naked truth.



Author's Response: Sad, but true, in itself. :-(

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

I see your muse has been busy. Looks like Capt. Blaine is under the aliens control.



Author's Response: Indeed, he is. :-(

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

The end?  Ya can't 'end-it' there!  What happens next?  What's gonna happen to Steve, while trapped inside this fish tank?  Blaine Too?  AND,  why is he in there.....

P.S.  Those 'Dover High' gal's would never hurt a fly....  ;`)



Author's Response: You'll just have to wait for the next chapter of INVASION OF THE BATON TWILRERS FROM OUTER SPACE to find out. ;-D

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

'Steve, sensing trouble, instinctivly sprang to his feet and started to run.'

  Oh yeah,  I could see that,  he might actually get away,...  OR- he could just, be inadvertantly stirring-up these young giantess' 'Playful-Side'  subconsciously of course,  instantly arousing their feminine nature at being in complete control of the situation...

*Just a bit more more 'pyscho-analisis' there.  I mean,  Hay, if you were in that 'exact' same situation, that's what  any red-blooded )shrunken) man, would do, right?  ;`)



Author's Response: In the immortal words of Bugs Bunny: "Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm! Could be."

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh dear. They have no respect for shrunken men. And the aliens plan to save us from ourselves. It sounds like something out a B movie. 

That said, I will be reading this story.



Author's Response: Thank you! And, needless to say, this will be tied in with I.O.T.B.T.F.O.S. ;-D

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Date: August 21 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

Attack of the 100 Foot Baton Twirlers,

And a Silver Cyclone who's probably no relation to the Red Tornado or the Hanna-Barbera 1978 knock-off Scarlet Cyclone (aka Retired Man in Legends of the Super-Heroes).

And Star City.

DC or not DC, that is the question, facetiously of course.



Author's Response: I knew you'd interpret it that way! ;-) Well, believe it or not, that's the actual Russian language designation for the urban complex surrounding the Yuri Gugarin Space Center (Russia's version of Cape Kennedy/Canaveral).

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aw, Poor Steve, shrunk down to a mere '6" tall and held captive by a team of gorgious majorettes?  What else could possible go wrong?  What could they do to him as a tiny 'Pet', make a mascot out of him... naw, I'll bet they've got some devious ideas that could possibly give him a 'New' perspective toward their physical fit-acrobatic dance craft.... 

Maybe, a little part in the 'Performance'....Yeah!  ;`)



Author's Response: What are you? A psychotronic mind-reader? ;-D

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Date: August 20 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ah ha, ha 'Beggin Strips', I like it, poolside room heh heh, yeah- dang it! Should've had the gal's staying at the pool... I bet Danielle looks great in a string Bikini!  ;`)



Author's Response: I think it's sexier (if not more provocative) to leave a little something to the imagination, alone. That being said; I'll do my best to accomodate you. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm not surprised he got shrunk. Is it just me or there a trend toward aliens and cheerleaders in your stories. 

I have a feeling these girls are not gentle with their pets.



Author's Response: First off: majorettes are _not_ cheerleaders! And, if you said so, otherwise, to their face? Well, be glad they can't _really_ shrink people who badmouth them! As for me, personally? I've always felt it fascinating that, after tossing a slender silver stick in the air, then spinning around on one leg, three times fast, they can still catch it fimrly, in one hand, more often than not! Well, that plus some of them look undeniably great in their form-fitting sleeveless leotards. ;-) As for being gentle with this guy? You'll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out. Insert fiendish "bwa-ha-ha" here.

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Date: August 19 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Many thanks to the author for letting us know whose headband is whose. LOL



Author's Response: If you could see what Wildcatman saw, you'd understand. ;-D

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Date: August 18 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

More batons, even if they're not being twirled.



Author's Response: You got it, sport. ;-D

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Date: August 18 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yes folks, back before there was NTSC, there was NTSB



Author's Response: Lol! Those are simply the initials for the National Transportation Safety Board. They make like Sherlock Holmes for every plane crash that occurs on American soil. Thank God those aren't as plentiful in real-life as they are in spy thrillers!

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Date: August 16 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

I did not see that comming. Thoese Silver Cyclones are dangerious. 



Author's Response: Wait till you find out why. ;-)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes, I got em!  (Thanks!)  I like the 'green' Pom-Pom girl, the one on the right...

Did you notice that chubby kid playing the drums, with black frame glasses?  He was focused-in on the blond girl second from right, he was locked-on and loaded!  Hee-hee...   ;`)



Author's Response: The blonde (with the dark purple headband and boot-poms) was Anna C. The brunette to the far right (with the dark green headband & boot-poms) was Danielle C.

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Date: July 30 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Michael Crichton! I have read a few of his books. I beleive he had a novel called sphere.

Your a busy man with the updates.

 



Author's Response: Where do you think I got the descreiption for mine? As for the updates, in general? I just do the best I can, as often as I can.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

I think that there used to be a 'Knights Inn' right at the I-77 OFF RAMP,  much nicer then that cheesy 'Motel 6'....he should've snagged a room there, they got an indoor pool.

btw,..ja get my e-mail?



Author's Response: Yes, I did. Did you get the "Canal Days 2012" clips?

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Date: July 26 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

ohhhhh, mystery. i love it. would it be rude to ask politely for more? awesome sauce start.



Author's Response: How can I possibly say no the author with the most voluptuous avatar @ Giantess City? ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well as long as you keep dabbling in drabbling, the lurkers and I will keep feeding our reading.



Author's Response: You're a poet...and I didn't even know it.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dover, Ohio!  Oh man, those southern Ohio Farm girls are some corn fed sweety's...

You can spot them anywhere, - 'Fat Calf's'   ;D......



Author's Response: Well, if you're a Youtube subscriber, I can e-mail you some videos I favoritized of "Tuscarawas Canal Day 2012." Those are some curvaceous ladies!

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