Reviewer: mikey31 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

Incredible story!  I only read it just now.  The characters seem so real, and my favorite relationship is between Lydia and Ethan.  I'd love to read more of their relationship--really focusing on that please.

Theirs is really a unique relationship.  You managed to make Lydia morally pure and good, while simultaneously having her dominate Ethan as her pet, due to the culture of her world.  Very interesting scenario. :)

It'd be awesome if Lydia introduced Ethan to her cleavage, while still having Ethan determined to be independent and equal, with the goal of returning to his own world.  Please continue this one.

You wrote Lydia as very attractive character...sort of a maternal goddess figure with a playful, teasing form of superiority.