Author is ridiculously skilled. Had literally three viewpoints on how panicked Bradley was, and how it was affecting his ability to think logically. And the spacing is really easy to read. Definitely written paperback books, and listened to feedback, i'll say.

Overall the story is good.  I agree the ending is a little weak and rushed.  There's alot of room for a sequel and I hope there is one.  Some ideas I came up with:  The Trial of Arell-Brad is taken to her homeworld to act as a witness for her trial, but quickly realizes that Earthies are on trial as well.  The punishment could be that they have to live with eachother to prove that they both can live in civilized society.  With Arell treating Brad as a pet and/or a man at any given time.;  Team 2-A new research is sent to confirm Arell's findings.  They are more objective and treat it as a science experiment, gathering "samples", etc.  I just think that Arell shouldn't just return to Earth, unless it in exile.  Otherwise you'd be covering the same ground you've done already.  Just some ideas, take it or leave it, its your story.  You may have more plotted out already.

Im with the guy below, its really hard to feel bad for Arell with the things she's done. I mean its obvious that humans(little ones) are jacked up and that it rubbed off on her but that doesn't suddenly make what she's done justified.

Secondly, about Avakon, its REALLY hard to believe that their race has no discrimination or war, especially when Arell goes and says that the ONLY reason her race would externimate the little humans is that they look like alike. So basically, any OTHER race that is violent and despicable is okay but just because we look like them, all of a sudden Arell suggests that we might be wiped out? That sounds like discrimination to me...

Also, Arell and her people could just leave Earth alone, yeah little humans are violent and whatnot, but they are not only bigger but also WAY more technologically advanced...Do we pose a threat to them or something? Destroying an entire planet because you don't like the people on it doesn't sound like something a benevolent race would do.

Something else I want to talk about is why I think, realistically, the giant humans are benevolent and all that jazz. I think its because of their lifespans...Im not sure exactly but you didnt mention anything about their brains being slower than ours, in fact maybe the opposite. And they have THOUSANDS of years to discuss and deliberate whatever differences they may have amongst eachother. We obviosly wouldnt have that luxury, so we resort to violence...I think its unfair of the giant people to be disgusted at how their little brother race is doing with such huge advantages.

Anyway, this was a great chapter, and it felt like an ending, although it seems you plan to continue this. I obviously dont agree with how Arell tried to justify her actions but Bradley was AMAZING in this chapter...Totally stole the show!

Storywise the ending was good with explaining the background about Arell´s motivations and all, but i wished there would have been some more..."private interactions" between Arell and Bradley some kind of more development in their relationship to each other.

At the beginning of the story i really thought that that is the core of the story and the conquering of earth is only kind of the reason why Arell showed up in the first place. But then Bradley was more time on the run than he actually spend on Arells ship.

That was a bit dissapointing to be honest.

I didnt expect them to make love lol but..well if Arell even a single time would kind of get out of her suit...well you know..

But perhaps ..at one day..Bradly is beamed up again while he watches up to the stars..short after he heard "hello my little earthy" in his head XD

And as a sidenote, i missed one arguement in the final conversation between Arell and Bradley. Human on earth my be less civilized then Arell´s people, but the agedifference of the both civilizations was never mentioned. I mean how long, how many probably million years do Arells people already live, how much time did they have since they lived in caves clothed in furry loincloths? I hardly can believe their never where violant in their evolution. They seemed to grew out of it, got a better understanding for life, learned to threasure it and all. But judging humans on earth for didnt learn that, after perhaps less than 1% of civilization age compared to Arells people is kind of unlogical. Its like hunting down gorrials in the jungle coz they didnt invent the wheel yet..after all gorrials are kind of pre-human in evolution. (perhaps they are not really but it fits to the example^^)

While it was a bit abrupt have to say I liked the ending, I half guessed at some of the aspects. How such a long life could effect her view of humanity, but was still surprised by the revelation. 

Wow the intensity, and Bradley came back.

Nice cliffhanger I really want to know what's going to happen.

Can what for for the next chapter.

Felt the need to reply to your question even if it wasn't a real question to: isn't that the entire point of the antagonist?

Yes it is but there is only so much i can take from a antagonist in a story. Not saying you are doing a bad job on her. Just saying she is little bit much for me to handle and not get irritated when reading her parts in the story.

She is not really acring any better than us by taking people from Earth and playing with them and at times flat out killing them. She says we are inferior race to her race but in the end she is still just a human also, just another kind of human.

Amazing story Sir Kevin, its a shame that we hv to wait like forever to get an update, i like whr this is going. CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE

Just a thought, can v c Arnell using her transporter to Transport a random flying plane to her ship to capture More Earthies to add her collection? Cuz at the start i had a feeling she may also do that, but BRADLEY comes 1st

Fantastic! :)

Oho, new chapter! There's never enough hide and seek set in a city on this site, I swear. I really hope you'll hold this one out, it's great. Bradley sure got lucky this time, but some kind of deus ex machina better not save his ass next time. It's about time he showed some backbone, like in this chapter, I really want him to pull something that can surprise even Arell.