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Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 3:20 PM Title: Prologue

This is a fantastic story. Woman-led NWO is among my personal favorite topics, and you pulled it off extremely well.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 5:39 PM Title: Part One

Hm... I'm still in the dark, but I have a few theories.

Author's Response:

The mysteries will start to clear up tomorrow. (I'm curious about your theories, though -- you wouldn't have them if I'd posted it all at once.) 

Also, I feel like I have to explain the scene with the friars and popes. The image comes from a great comical/erotic/horrific sequence in Pasolini's Canterbury Tales, the one where an angel visits some lascivious friar during the night, tells him it's time to die, and then carries him down him to hell.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 9:26 AM Title: Prologue

I'm intrigued. I have read none of the stories you've mentioned, but I get the idea behind it. 

But I'm interested to know, is there a sort of plot coming?



Author's Response:

I've built the narrative in a frame design -- meaning that the prologue and epilogue are separated from the main narrative & plot structure itself (in this case, by a story within a story). 

So that means all you see right now is the frame, which is mostly background information, a sketch of the customs and village life, and some clues about what's to come.

Thanks for reading. (I also need to get around to reading and reviewing some of the longer stories on this site, being written right now. Yours and gerald's and few others look pretty interesting, for instance. Soon.)

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 8:37 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds like Children of the Corn.

Author's Response:

Prepare to be surprised, then.

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